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In My Dreams

in my mouth silver giving me a sharp bite hurts against tin foil in my paintings silver gives the glitz and sparkle she needs not always but sometimes in my silverware drawer fake silver called plated faux not real in my dreams gold no silver at all

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Date: 11/14/2020 5:08:00 PM
Love the finishing stanza!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/14/2020 6:37:00 PM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 11/14/2020 4:15:00 PM
so glad your dreams are gold my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/14/2020 6:37:00 PM
They are but I like silver too
Date: 11/14/2020 9:15:00 AM
But not all that glitters is gold.... Nice dreams, Caren..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/14/2020 6:38:00 PM
True Silent One and I am easily fooled

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