Constance La France Poet Free verse

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In My Blue Dream

and in my dream I float in the blue heavenly sea
I am full of calmness, truth and tranquility
oh the blue I see and the blue you see 
is a different blue
so many blues all united in harmony
sapphire, azure, cobalt, indigo, midnight
and the soft blue of a robin's egg
oh so cool the blue of melancholy music
a blue moon at night, a blue gem stone
  a blue bird flying in a baby blue sky
    a blue flower reaching for the beryl
      a blue fish swimming peacefully
        a blue butterfly sweetly fluttering 
all united in harmony and beauty and blue

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February 28, 2016

Poetry/Free Verse/in my blue dream
Copyright Protected, ID 16-762-454-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Submitted to the contest, The Color Blue
Sponsor, Janis Thompson

Sixth Place
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Submitted to the contest, United Colors: Blue
Sponsor, Silent One

Third Place

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Mark Martin February 2, 2017 at 2:30 PM The repetition of the word blue really works in this free verse! Congratulations BW! :-)

Sunita U.D Palawon January 31, 2017 at 11:17 PM Wow! I'm carried away! Well done BW!:)

Teddy Kimathi January 31, 2017 at 1:45 AM Really breathtaking and beautiful!!! Congrats BW, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Claudia Polydoro January 30, 2017 at 7:52 PM Congratulations on your placement - such a beautiful poem :)

Sandra Haight January 30, 2017 at 6:37 PM Such wonderful imageries of 'blue' Constance. Very lovely, and congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison January 30, 2017 at 5:40 PM what a gem of a free verse Constance congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Deborah Burch January 30, 2017 at 2:10 PM Congratulations!! BW!! :) well done!! Big Hugggs!! Love ya. Deb

Poet Destroyer A March 7, 2016 at 7:35 AM Awesome win...Linda Constance La France March 7, 2016 at 7:52 PM Linda, thanks so much for the awesome ~

Richard Lamoureux March 2, 2016 at 9:18 AM So cool, it looks like a wave. Great poem Constance. Constance La France March 2, 2016 at 12:26 PM Richard, thanks so much for visiting the blue with the great !

Vladislav Raven March 1, 2016 at 11:01 PM Hi Broken, firstly, congratulations on your win in the contest, my entry was too late. I Love the water, can't go in it any more but i still Love the water. I read this excellent write and once again i find sublime peace, my heart feels light. Your words flow so gently from beginning to end. This is going into my faves my friend and it is a most definite seven. An excellent write....Vlad. Constance La France March 2, 2016 at 7:44 AM Vlad, thanks so much for the congratulations, the excellent and the sublime, I use meditation before writing my poems to take me to the place I need to write from. Oh thanks for the fav and the 7, appreciate ~

Beautiful Scars March 1, 2016 at 7:53 PM Broken Wings, Congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles* Constance La France March 1, 2016 at 9:44 PM Laura, thanks so much for the congratulations, appreciate !

James Inman March 1, 2016 at 10:14 AM Blue, for me, is the most expressive of colors from sweet robins egg blue to mystical sapphire to deep emotional indigo and everything in between. You've painted beautiful images with your shades of blue. Constance La France March 1, 2016 at 5:22 PM James, thank you for visiting with that wonderful comment, oh yes all the lovely shades of blue are inspiring ~

Elaine George March 1, 2016 at 4:54 AM Beautiful, Constance. Many congrats on your win. Elaine Constance La France March 1, 2016 at 5:38 PM Elaine, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations !!

Andrea Dietrich February 28, 2016 at 7:29 PM I love blue and you got in many of the same things I adore in that color with your sweet blue poem, Constance. Nicely done. Constance La France February 29, 2016 at 1:12 AM Andrea, thanks for visiting my blue poem, and for the compliment, appreciate !

Mark Peterson February 28, 2016 at 7:12 PM Thoroughly enjoyable and worthy of its theme. Good job. I'm blue with envy. Constance La France February 29, 2016 at 1:13 AM Mark, thanks for visiting the blue, and for the compliments !!

Carl Fraser February 28, 2016 at 7:04 PM Hi, Great imagery here in this wonderful piece giving tribute to blue. Good luck in the contest. Blessings Carl Constance La France February 29, 2016 at 1:14 AM Carl, thanks for visiting with the wonderful, so appreciated !

CayCay Godwin February 28, 2016 at 3:38 PM Very pretty ... CayCay Constance La France February 28, 2016 at 4:09 PM CayCay, thanks for visiting with the pretty !