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In My Blue Dream

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and in my dream I float in the blue heavenly sea I am full of calmness, truth and tranquility oh the blue I see and the blue you see is a different blue so many blues all united in harmony sapphire, azure, cobalt, indigo, midnight and the soft blue of a robin's egg oh so cool the blue of melancholy music a blue moon at night, a blue gem stone a blue bird flying in a baby blue sky a blue flower reaching for the beryl a blue fish swimming peacefully a blue butterfly sweetly fluttering all united in harmony and beauty and blue __________________________ February 28, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/in my blue dream Copyright Protected, ID 16-762-454-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, The Color Blue Sponsor, Janis Thompson Sixth Place ___________________________________ Submitted to the contest, United Colors: Blue Sponsor, Silent One Third Place

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Mark Martin

Date: 2/2/2017 2:30:00 PM

The repetition of the word blue really works in this free verse! Congratulations BW! :-)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 1/31/2017 11:17:00 PM

Wow! I'm carried away! Well done BW!:)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 1/31/2017 1:45:00 AM

Really breathtaking and beautiful!!! Congrats BW, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 1/30/2017 7:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement - such a beautiful poem :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/30/2017 6:37:00 PM

Such wonderful imageries of 'blue' Constance. Very lovely, and congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 1/30/2017 5:40:00 PM

what a gem of a free verse Constance congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Deborah Burch

Date: 1/30/2017 2:10:00 PM

Congratulations!! BW!! :) well done!! Big Hugggs!! Love ya. Deb

Janis Thompson

Date: 1/30/2017 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement with this awe inspiring free verse. Thanks for being in the contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/7/2016 7:35:00 AM

Awesome win...Linda

Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2016 7:52:00 PM

Linda, thanks so much for the awesome ~

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/2/2016 9:18:00 AM

So cool, it looks like a wave. Great poem Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2016 12:26:00 PM

Richard, thanks so much for visiting the blue with the great !

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/1/2016 11:01:00 PM

Hi Broken, firstly, congratulations on your win in the contest, my entry was too late. I Love the water, can't go in it any more but i still Love the water. I read this excellent write and once again i find sublime peace, my heart feels light. Your words flow so gently from beginning to end. This is going into my faves my friend and it is a most definite seven. An excellent write....Vlad.

Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2016 7:44:00 AM

Vlad, thanks so much for the congratulations, the excellent and the sublime, I use meditation before writing my poems to take me to the place I need to write from. Oh thanks for the fav and the 7, appreciate ~

Lu Loo

Date: 3/1/2016 7:53:00 PM

Broken Wings, Congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*

Constance La France
Date: 3/1/2016 9:44:00 PM

Laura, thanks so much for the congratulations, appreciate !

James Inman

Date: 3/1/2016 10:14:00 AM

Blue, for me, is the most expressive of colors from sweet robins egg blue to mystical sapphire to deep emotional indigo and everything in between. You've painted beautiful images with your shades of blue.

Constance La France
Date: 3/1/2016 5:22:00 PM

James, thank you for visiting with that wonderful comment, oh yes all the lovely shades of blue are inspiring ~