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In Moon's Glow

I’m sailing on a blue sea in moon’s glow. Beyond the horizon my days are kissed with magic; far into the past I go. Walks along a cherry lane! An autumn mist! Reality or just a fantasy? Beyond the horizon my days are kissed. I think I can recall a Hanah Lee. . . on wisps of memory to which I cling. Reality or just a fantasy? What birds of splendor did I once hear sing? I yearn to know again; I slowly drift on wisps of memory to which I cling. Upon a dragon’s tail I wish to lift! Dreams ripple on the waves, and to a land I yearn to know again I slowly drift. To run again with bare feet in white sand! I’m sailing on a blue sea in moon’s glow. Dreams ripple on the waves, and to a land with magic - far into the past I go! the magic moon . . . in moonlight’s absence could fantasy survive? 12/19/12 Inspired by the Peter, Paul and Mary song "Puff the Magic Dragon" and the "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser Poetry Contest For Mark Toney's the '2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 25' Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/3/2023 1:23:00 PM
One of my all time favorite P,P & M songs Andrea! So happy to see it see the light of day again! Wonderful, creative write! Congratulations my friend!
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Date: 1/31/2023 4:34:00 PM
Dear Andrea, your poem is enchanting and endearing and so rich in imagery. I especially like the questionku.. just so beautifully phrased and thought-provoking. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/29/2023 8:00:00 PM
I like to call it a fantasy ! Beautiful penning, escorting one to a dreamy land. Congratulations, Andrea on your prestigious win in the Marathon...
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Date: 1/29/2023 5:42:00 AM
This is amazing writing - on the verge of or perhaps, yes - it is simply brilliant. Love it. Glad you won. Congrats to you. God bless you too. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/28/2023 3:14:00 PM
Andrea, I thoroughly enjoyed your ten-year-old terzanelle, which is based on a song that I studied in school over 50 years ago! OMG! "Upon a dragon’s tail I wish to lift! ~ Dreams ripple on the waves, and to a land ~ I yearn to know again I slowly drift." A Fav for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 25. There is only one more Marathon mile to run before the Qualifier's Final Placement Contest! More information about the Qualifier's Final Placement Contest will be given at the Mile 26 checkpoint.
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Date: 1/28/2023 9:18:00 PM
so happy you liked this one. I used to teach the history of rock to my ESL students and there was a time when even the foreign kids in the 90s remembered this song . That class never was too successful, however. People just don't care about music that was more than 20 years before their time, and the kids today would laugh to hear it. Sad to me. i sure would have loved it if any of my Spanish classes had featured learning Spanish with the history of popular songs of their culture.
Date: 5/13/2020 4:44:00 PM
This is quite a beauty Andrea. I see why it came in on the top! Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 5/12/2020 6:44:00 AM
"Dreams ripple on the waves, and to a land with magic"....this is something envisioned by me at nights :) Loved the imagination. Congratulations on your well-deserved placement. Aditi
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Date: 5/12/2020 1:57:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Hugs
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Date: 5/11/2020 4:54:00 PM
How fun to read this terzanelle inspired by an old favorite song of mine. When I read 'cherry lane' and 'autumn mist' I was starting to wonder... grateful for your explanation at the end. Congrats on your #1 placement today!
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Date: 6/18/2013 4:07:00 PM
Enjoyed this very much. Congratulation on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/18/2013 1:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea. I love this fantasy... David
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Date: 6/17/2013 7:08:00 PM
I enjoyed reading again. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/17/2013 4:48:00 PM
Girl, you own this form!! One day, I will show you so many ways in which it can be butchered... Congratulations.... Love and hugs... Jake
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Date: 6/17/2013 12:01:00 PM
Andrea, , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ thank you for taking your time and entering my contest. Luv* SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2013 11:46:00 AM
Andrea,Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2013 11:19:00 AM
Great poem! I could just see myself drifting through the misty, wavy moonlight. Not likely, but it's a great thought. ;)
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Date: 1/12/2013 11:09:00 AM
Andrea congrats on your win, excellent write...David
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Date: 1/12/2013 3:32:00 AM
I love the line 'beyond the horizon my days are kissed' souperb Andy congratulations on your winning spot xx
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:46:00 PM
Andrea.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser " contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
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Date: 1/11/2013 7:59:00 PM
Great poetry Andrea! I really felt uplifted by this! Congratulations! E=mc²
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Date: 1/11/2013 7:37:00 PM
hmmm I saw Pet Pan in this too! Congrads on your win Light & Love
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Date: 1/11/2013 6:46:00 PM
I agree, you are so talented, congratulations.
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Date: 1/4/2013 2:48:00 AM
Your poems inspire me. Your language rich, your talent great, your heart an ocean of tenederness! Thank you!
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Date: 12/31/2012 4:05:00 PM
A fantasy beyond our dreams can take us farther than moon beams. A tale of lore from long ago can teach us things we use to know. Deep in our hearts where secrets live. The peace exists when we forgive. :) Peace.
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Date: 12/30/2012 10:56:00 PM
Hi Andrea my dearest friend! I'm sorry, if I've missed to read this outstanding terzanelle of yours. Yes, you did it right , very well and in a very unique way. I'll take it as my best example and favs. The image is so splendid and awesome. Mine just focused on imagination itself. I already edited. I hope I did it better. Million thanks for your help and precious time my dear friend. Good luck and best wishes always in the contest. HAPPY HAPPY NEW YEAR! love always, Leonora
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