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In Memory of Backyards

Back then, backyards were big enough to nurture a growing soul and provide a space for the earth to play out its seasons in full rehearsal. There were wide tracks of grass, trees to climb, old sheds to rummage with their interiors full of tools and bric-a-brac webbed in history. There was food - ripe tomatoes and corn from a vegetable patch, grapes swelling under a cool canopy of vines, soft skins bursting their dark sweetness inside expectant mouths, almonds, apricots and the luscious dribble of a warm peach down sticky cheeks. Some had roaming chickens with their bounty of eggs. Backyards were blotting paper for a child's hurt, a hiding place to get away, a theater for projecting the phantasies of a sheriff or a princess high in a golden tower. And in summer, a sprinkler casting a gauntlet of cold spray for tiny feet to challenge. Then it all ends when backyards become too small and more exotic places call a restless soul to leave its Eden and break the spell of its beginning.

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Date: 11/13/2023 1:19:00 PM
Yes what a shame that kids these days don’t often explore, as we used to. Even in the 1980’s I had two nephews visit and I lived (at that time) on 10 acres near a cow paddock with a gully overgrown with Lantana with tunnels through the undergrowth. They never stepped a foot outside. Really enjoyed SuZ
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/14/2023 4:30:00 AM
Sad in a way that such connectivity to nature as experienced through the agency of a backyard is overlooked and given less value these days.. Thankyou so much Suzanne for sharing yr thoughts and giving some time to the poem..appreciated.
Date: 11/13/2023 5:23:00 AM
Great read. At my house, when young, punishment sometimes was making us stay in. We were always outside. LOL Rain, snow, heat it didnt make any difference. We had a huge backyard with a very large garden. The property line was marked by a barbed wire fence and on the other side was a horse pasture with horses. The adventures we had, on and off horseback. Your poem brings back such vivid memories, Paul Thank you.
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/14/2023 4:23:00 AM
Fascinated with your experiences of backyard nostalgia, thankyou for sharing, makes he feel good....so pleased the poem resonated and gave rise to these happy memories. Take care mate...Paul
Date: 11/13/2023 4:31:00 AM
a masterpiece, Paul! Your descriptions of backyards 'back then' touched my heart, igniting memories of my own childhood backyard, one that was big enough to 'nurture my soul.' I love that image! We always had a garden and learned lessons in the helping and doing, lessons no longer prevalent. I agree, backyards are too small...creates discontent I believe. Am faving this one. Have a splendid day! Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/14/2023 4:14:00 AM
The poem seems to have triggered some fond memories Sara...honored it has managed to do so. Thankyou so much for your kind words...your supportive comments are treasured....Paul
Date: 11/13/2023 3:23:00 AM
Great poem and so true. All the new homes have tiny gardens if any...Thankfully I have an old home with a very big garden....over populated countries is a big issue..
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/14/2023 4:06:00 AM
Indeed fortunate SO to have that precious space. Even in Australia, one of the least populated countries, back yards are virtually extinct in the new housing developments. The way of the future I guess. Sad consequence of progress. Many thanks for yr comments SO, appreciated. Paul
Date: 11/13/2023 2:57:00 AM
I see other people making comments like "how do you do it..." and such and I'm wondering what everyone's on. But I read your poems and I'm in, you set the scene in milliseconds (how!?), I'm transported and visualise the scene and have an emotional response to it (crazy!) and I've forgotten myself, feel I'm seeing through the eyes of the poet almost like the way they depict visions in films (almost, just almost - I don't want to jump with two feet into this comment!) then your ending is exact
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/14/2023 3:56:00 AM
What can I say....heartfelt thanks for such praise, moreover that you allowed this poem to speak to you. Value the time you have taken to relay your thoughts, most humbling and received with utmost respect. Take care DD, Paul
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Date: 11/13/2023 3:02:00 AM
and I'm wistful and know what you mean because you've described the indescribable that I've scrabbled around trying to understand for a lifetime. I obviously don't hide my connection to your poetry - but I'm just stunned once again and I have to add my feedback about me as a person is that I'm quite (!) hard to please. But when it's good it's good Paul and you may as well have this full on reaction because it's how I feel. I'm happy to look foolish but know I'm being honest rather than offer anything understated. Next time I might go and calm down, reread it then comment haha yes, I should do that! Signed #1 fan :)

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