Paula Goldsmith Poet Dramatic Monologue

In Marked Territory

The very hot summer is coming to a close,
fresh cool weather is in the air.
I love my walks on autumn days,
it puts a giddy up in my steps.
Off to the pretty park we will go,
looking for the In Marked Territory area.
The grass seems much greener,
with a very deep rich smell.
Open the gate quickly before I let loose,
a fun doggie park is the way to go.

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Valsa George November 1, 2024 at 8:19 PM Hi Paula, this light hearted poem of yours gives a fresh feel. I can imagine how you enjoy the cool weather and makes your way into your favorite haunt, the park. All the best dear one. I too think of joining this contest. Paula Goldsmith November 4, 2024 at 9:04 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my fun "In Marked Territory" write to be a light hearted poem. It is Not true, just a fun write... Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! .................

Jennifer Proxenos October 31, 2024 at 1:16 AM How relaxing, you and your doggie on a walk to AND IN wonderful green fields, enjoying the togetherness and warm connection with nature and your pet. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Paula Goldsmith October 31, 2024 at 9:16 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "In Marked Territory" write.  Hugs... Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! ................

I Am Anaya October 28, 2024 at 4:03 PM One of my favorite things to do, Paula. A hiking spot for me, the trail begins at the dog park. One of my special places to go. Ty for the memory. ~Anaya Paula Goldsmith October 31, 2024 at 9:14 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "In Marked Territory" write. Glad this write gave you good memories.... Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! ................

Sara Kendrick October 28, 2024 at 2:07 PM Reads like a delightful place to go to walk the dog. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K Paula Goldsmith October 31, 2024 at 9:12 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "In Marked Territory" write. I enjoyed writing this one. Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! ................

Deb M October 28, 2024 at 11:52 AM Light and bright walk in marked territory Paula and lovely poem! Debx Paula Goldsmith October 28, 2024 at 12:19 PM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my fun "In Marked Territory" write to be a lovely poem. Hope you are OK... Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! .................

Hiya Sharma October 28, 2024 at 11:28 AM Dear Paula, this is such a sweet and light-hearted poem that makes me feel the warmth in the air of myriad seasons ~ I love your eloquent descriptions as you take the reader with you and dive in the scene so beautifully! Enjoyed reading this piece, sending you light and best wishes always ~ Paula Goldsmith October 28, 2024 at 12:17 PM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "In Marked Territory" write. It was so much fun to bring to life. Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! .................

Jay Narain October 28, 2024 at 10:37 AM Great poem, realistic walk in the park. Paula Goldsmith October 28, 2024 at 12:16 PM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my fun "In Marked Territory" write to be a Great poem. I loved writing this one. Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! .................

Daniel Henry Rodgers October 28, 2024 at 10:14 AM Dear Paula, You and I just love the autumn season, and your poem brings me to the fullness of that season. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Paula Goldsmith October 28, 2024 at 10:21 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "In Marked Territory" write. It was so much fun to write. Oh yes, Autumn is a pretty time of the year. Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! .................

John Read October 28, 2024 at 9:39 AM Autumn and spring my favourite seasons, enjoyed reading your poem Paula good luck in the contest. Paula Goldsmith October 28, 2024 at 10:17 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "In Marked Territory" write. I love the Autumn time. It is a pretty time of the year. Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! .................

Paula Goldsmith October 28, 2024 at 9:15 AM In Marked Territory~Date Written:10/28/2024~Sponsored by:Edward~Human Written By Poet