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In Marked Territory

The very hot summer is coming to a close,
fresh cool weather is in the air.
I love my walks on autumn days,
it puts a giddy up in my steps.
Off to the pretty park we will go,
looking for the In Marked Territory area.
The grass seems much greener,
with a very deep rich smell.
Open the gate quickly before I let loose,
a fun doggie park is the way to go.

Copyright © Paula Goldsmith | Year Posted 2024

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Valsa George Date: 11/1/2024 8:19:00 PM Hi Paula, this light hearted poem of yours gives a fresh feel. I can imagine how you enjoy the cool weather and makes your way into your favorite haunt, the park. All the best dear one. I too think of joining this contest. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 11/4/2024 9:04:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my fun "In Marked Territory" write to be a light hearted poem. It is Not true, just a fun write... Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! .................

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 10/31/2024 1:16:00 AM How relaxing, you and your doggie on a walk to AND IN wonderful green fields, enjoying the togetherness and warm connection with nature and your pet. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/31/2024 9:16:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "In Marked Territory" write.  Hugs... Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! ................

I Am Anaya Date: 10/28/2024 4:03:00 PM One of my favorite things to do, Paula. A hiking spot for me, the trail begins at the dog park. One of my special places to go. Ty for the memory. ~Anaya Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/31/2024 9:14:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "In Marked Territory" write. Glad this write gave you good memories.... Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! ................

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/28/2024 2:07:00 PM Reads like a delightful place to go to walk the dog. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/31/2024 9:12:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "In Marked Territory" write. I enjoyed writing this one. Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! ................

Deb M Date: 10/28/2024 11:52:00 AM Light and bright walk in marked territory Paula and lovely poem! Debx Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/28/2024 12:19:00 PM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my fun "In Marked Territory" write to be a lovely poem. Hope you are OK... Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! .................

Hiya Sharma Date: 10/28/2024 11:28:00 AM Dear Paula, this is such a sweet and light-hearted poem that makes me feel the warmth in the air of myriad seasons ~ I love your eloquent descriptions as you take the reader with you and dive in the scene so beautifully! Enjoyed reading this piece, sending you light and best wishes always ~ Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/28/2024 12:17:00 PM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "In Marked Territory" write. It was so much fun to bring to life. Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! .................

Jay Narain Date: 10/28/2024 10:37:00 AM Great poem, realistic walk in the park. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/28/2024 12:16:00 PM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my fun "In Marked Territory" write to be a Great poem. I loved writing this one. Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! .................

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 10/28/2024 10:14:00 AM Dear Paula, You and I just love the autumn season, and your poem brings me to the fullness of that season. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/28/2024 10:21:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "In Marked Territory" write. It was so much fun to write. Oh yes, Autumn is a pretty time of the year. Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! .................

John Read Date: 10/28/2024 9:39:00 AM Autumn and spring my favourite seasons, enjoyed reading your poem Paula good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/28/2024 10:17:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "In Marked Territory" write. I love the Autumn time. It is a pretty time of the year. Now we are off to the doggie park. Hooray!!! .................

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/28/2024 9:15:00 AM In Marked Territory~Date Written:10/28/2024~Sponsored by:Edward~Human Written By Poet Login to Reply