In Love For the First Time and Counting

The birds are chirping
the sky is blue
the trees are green 
and so are you
i fell in love
for the first time
my girl is pretty
my girl is smart
she is an angel
and she is fun
nothing is missing
and it's all fine
today i'm trying 
to be just nice
see the gay couple 
down the street
kissing each-other 
like little birds
the neighbor is common thief
must have a strong reason for it
my boss can keep
my whole paycheck
and go away and take a break
i'll work for him my entire life
and don't pay me the  overtime 
today Snooki looks just like J Lo
and the mule next door
like Barry White
God this is just a perfect day
i'm all pumped-up
and that's OK...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:14 PM
Dino, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs -- LINDA --
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January 17, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Amazing best loved poem landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 5:01 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Dino.
A  Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:28 PM
Dino, Congratulations on your Best love poem win. Thank you for the support **SKAT**
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July 28, 2012 at 1:06 PM
No comments on this poem... - I like it a lot, well done Dino. - Have a nice weekend - oxox Anne-Lise
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