In Love

In love is when
The snows of winter vaporise,
And buds appear,
When veils ascend from jaded eyes
And they clear,
When the heart deliciously surges,
And defibrilates,
And the rush of tender urges
Intoxicates.

In love is when
The breath of autumn whispers low,
And fires burn,
When in promises of fresher snow
Leaves fall and turn,
When the saddest pang of losing
Begs exquisite pain
When the things beyond one’s choosing
See it go again.

NOTE: I'm still alive. Been busy with my ongoing music project, which saw me turn to 
songwriting and amateur - very amateur - music video production, which can be checked out 
on the link below if anyone has a mind to. This new piece marks a tentative return to poetry. 
More to follow, perhaps.

POP ART!

http://www.myspace.com/thewatercolours
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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George   Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 6:12 AM
My dearest Tony, Just dropped by to read your poetry, I am still here posting at the soup. I come and go from time-to-time, as I like you, follow a path that leads me in many directions. I do hope - with all my heart that you will continue to write poetry, for as you know you truly have a poets heart as this poem so clearly displays. I am so happy to here all is well with you and wish you much happiness in all your persuits. Elaine
Foulk Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 8:40 AM
this was a great poem.
Mac Donald Avatar
December 24, 2010 at 6:32 PM
Nadolig Llawen, Tony. Beautiful piece, soft and somewhat sorrowful. Enjoy your music project, and thank you for continuing to share your verses with us. Mikki
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Tony. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2010 at 2:11 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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April 13, 2010 at 6:49 PM
Congrats Tony, on "In Love" being featured. Vince
Fisher Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 12:14 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tony. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
Caliri Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 11:42 PM
Aint nothing wrong with pop art...or this kinda art! just keep going!
Brown Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 3:55 AM
WOW What a come back to the Soup. I often wonder what you are up to Tony. So many have gone away and not returned and some have come back under different names. I will be watching for more. I wish you the best on your endeavors. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 11:57 AM
Tony, this is very good writing, and I really appreciate your "original" comment to me. YOu got exactly the way self-deprication works in humor! Glad to meet you here and hope to read many more of your poems. Andrea ps Love your imagery in this poem and the way you contrast spring and winter love.
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