In Line for the Bathroom

Fido took time watering the large tree
Forced to stand in line at dog park to pee
Fidgeting they can't hold it
Fearing to move they all sit
A pet peeve, with bladder concern; knock-knee

5/1/2024

doglimerick

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Richard Lamoureux

May 8, 2024 at 9:15 AM

These poems have been fun to read. I think this might be my favourite so far.

Jan Allison

May 7, 2024 at 10:40 AM

very funny indeed Eve andI am thrilled we both used the name Fido lol, hugs Jan xx

I Am Anaya

May 5, 2024 at 6:15 PM

Eve, this made me laugh, great entry! Pet-peeve ..lol. hugs~Anaya

Tony Hargreaves

May 3, 2024 at 8:45 AM

Methinks the dog has a prostate issue. I know the problem. Tony.

Victor Buhagiar

May 2, 2024 at 3:14 AM

Loved your poem. Great limerick with a wonderful imagination. Best for a win, my friend. Hugs.

Eileen Manassian

May 1, 2024 at 11:03 PM

Cute. Loved how it goes with the photo. Hope all is well, dear.

Paula Goldsmith

May 1, 2024 at 10:05 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun "Dog" write. I hate long bathroom lines. "Good Luck." Looks like we both did this fun one.….. Have a fun day playing outside...............

Daniel Henry Rodgers

May 1, 2024 at 6:52 AM

Dear Eve, your witty depiction of the canine conundrum at the dog park made me smile. Your playful rhymes capture the shared frustration of both dogs and owners alike as they navigate the trials of bladder control and waiting in line. Your clever wordplay adds an extra layer of amusement to the scene. Thanks for sharing this lighthearted moment! - Blessings, Daniel

Eve Roper

May 1, 2024 at 8:27 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words, Daniel. Eve