In Lieu of Flowers

“In lieu of flowers”, the obituary read, “please donate to a worthy cause.”
But when I thought about how she loved her garden, I really had to take a moment 
and pause.
I know her daughters meant no harm, they just didn’t want to deal with the mess;
Having just flown in from out of town, solely to put their poor mother to rest.
But throughout the years I watched that dear labor in her garden all day;
More than once or twice my house was blessed with the fragrance from one of her 
bouquets.

“In lieu of flowers” – are you kidding me!
“In lieu of flowers” – yeah, just wait and see.

Her daughters arrived at the funeral home, not really expecting much of a crowd;
I walked right in and introduced myself, probably talking a bit too loud.
“I’m your mother’s neighbor, the eligible bachelor; she may have mentioned my 
name.
She loved to tell me about you two – too bad you never came.”

About that time the truck arrived and they started unloading the back;
Flowers and wreaths of every kind in every imaginable color but black.

“Oh goodness sake!”
“What’s all this!”
“And where did they all come from?!”

“Oh don’t worry girls – they’re all from me.  And, they’re for your wonderful Mom.”

That funeral home was overflowing, with roses and pansies and mums;
Tulips and daisies; carnations and lilies; orchids of every kind.
There were snapdragons, Mona Lisas and delphinium;
Dianthus, lisianthus and mathiola amongst them.

The girls were shocked, that was plain to see,
They didn’t know what to do,
But their mother was happy,
Smiling down on me,
That much I know is true.


By Joe Flach for the "Flowers" contest.  
Okay, so it's a free verse that rhymes, I didn't mean to make it rhyme, it just sort of happened that way!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:03 AM
Congratulations Joe on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Flowers". Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 1:29 PM
Congratulations on your win. You earned it with this great write. I had a cousin who passed away very recently. Reading this presentation reminded me of him.
Calhoun Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Hi Joe - Congratulations on your deserved WIN in Francine's "Flower" contest. Best wishes, KC
Onclaud Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 7:22 AM
another super delight of a poem from you… applause for the thrilling win, joe! ..:) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 5:51 AM
Congrats Joe on your wonderful win in the Flowers contest with this impressive write and exciting entry my friend.. enjoy another chart topper with luv..
Johnson Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 10:55 PM
Sometimes rhyme does its own thing. You wrote on the same theme as I, Joe. Great job. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 8:31 PM
this was wonderful Highest rating I give for this charmer! congratulations! Luv, Andrea
Mannan Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 7:57 PM
joe this is one of the most amazing poetry ever written.Many congratulations for this win.
Mehta Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Joe
Roberts Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 6:09 PM
well Joe if it hadn't been such an obvious rhyme to me it would have been first, but I just couldn't bend my rules quite that much so congrats on your 4th place win in my contest, this was an astounding piece, just perfect
Mcmahon Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 9:52 PM
beautiful words, and a heart-warming tale- fantastic
Richards Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 8:02 AM
Okay.......now, dear Joe....so you had to put those tears in my eyes, didn't you!!? Well....you succeeded to do just that! What a wonderful, loving, and warm hearted poem.....a keeper!! :)
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