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In Lieu of Flowers

“In lieu of flowers”, the obituary read, “please donate to a worthy cause.” But when I thought about how she loved her garden, I really had to take a moment and pause. I know her daughters meant no harm, they just didn’t want to deal with the mess; Having just flown in from out of town, solely to put their poor mother to rest. But throughout the years I watched that dear labor in her garden all day; More than once or twice my house was blessed with the fragrance from one of her bouquets. “In lieu of flowers” – are you kidding me! “In lieu of flowers” – yeah, just wait and see. Her daughters arrived at the funeral home, not really expecting much of a crowd; I walked right in and introduced myself, probably talking a bit too loud. “I’m your mother’s neighbor, the eligible bachelor; she may have mentioned my name. She loved to tell me about you two – too bad you never came.” About that time the truck arrived and they started unloading the back; Flowers and wreaths of every kind in every imaginable color but black. “Oh goodness sake!” “What’s all this!” “And where did they all come from?!” “Oh don’t worry girls – they’re all from me. And, they’re for your wonderful Mom.” That funeral home was overflowing, with roses and pansies and mums; Tulips and daisies; carnations and lilies; orchids of every kind. There were snapdragons, Mona Lisas and delphinium; Dianthus, lisianthus and mathiola amongst them. The girls were shocked, that was plain to see, They didn’t know what to do, But their mother was happy, Smiling down on me, That much I know is true. By Joe Flach for the "Flowers" contest. Okay, so it's a free verse that rhymes, I didn't mean to make it rhyme, it just sort of happened that way!

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Date: 2/22/2011 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations Joe on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Flowers". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You earned it with this great write. I had a cousin who passed away very recently. Reading this presentation reminded me of him.
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Date: 2/5/2011 12:20:00 PM
Hi Joe - Congratulations on your deserved WIN in Francine's "Flower" contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/1/2011 7:22:00 AM
another super delight of a poem from you… applause for the thrilling win, joe! ..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/1/2011 5:51:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your wonderful win in the Flowers contest with this impressive write and exciting entry my friend.. enjoy another chart topper with luv..
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Date: 1/31/2011 10:55:00 PM
Sometimes rhyme does its own thing. You wrote on the same theme as I, Joe. Great job. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:31:00 PM
this was wonderful Highest rating I give for this charmer! congratulations! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/31/2011 7:57:00 PM
joe this is one of the most amazing poetry ever written.Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Joe
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:09:00 PM
well Joe if it hadn't been such an obvious rhyme to me it would have been first, but I just couldn't bend my rules quite that much so congrats on your 4th place win in my contest, this was an astounding piece, just perfect
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Date: 1/26/2011 9:52:00 PM
beautiful words, and a heart-warming tale- fantastic
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Date: 1/26/2011 8:02:00 AM
Okay.......now, dear Joe....so you had to put those tears in my eyes, didn't you!!? Well....you succeeded to do just that! What a wonderful, loving, and warm hearted poem.....a keeper!! :)
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