In Late Fall

on the fading bush as the lone red rose trembles morning frost glistens

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/18/2020 12:15:00 PM

Wonderful lovely poem! Have a wonderful time

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 6:50:00 AM

Lovely imagery. Congrats on your win, Andrea.

Mark Toney

Date: 11/9/2019 9:49:00 AM

Andrea, your "in late fall" is lovely. Congrats on your win! ~Mark

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2019 1:33:00 AM

very beautiful Andrea am surprised this didnt place higher, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 11/8/2019 11:55:00 AM

Congrats for your win for this splendid verse, Andrea - Always delighted to see you on the winners list - Bob H

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 11/8/2019 5:19:00 AM

The brilliance of decay. Fine pen. Congrats, Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2019 4:58:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 11/7/2019 10:30:00 PM

Poor rose. Beautiful image. Well done.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/7/2019 8:01:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku, lovely imagery, thanks for participating!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/7/2019 7:56:00 PM

Very nice, Andrea. I just had a single yellow rose blossom from a rose bush that my landlord cut down. The bush was nearly 1-foot tall. But it did produce a single yellow rose. Very Nice haiku! ~Congrats on your win... Charlie