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In Her Eternal Sleep

The river flows, carrying her Away from earth out to somewhere--- Bird-music groans as harsh wind blows- Carrying her, the river flows. The gulls above cry ,that for now My fingers shake like leaf to bough, Beneath the melancholy sky That for now. the gulls above cry. This eternal sleep, when nights grow blind I long for all that's warm and kind… Thirsty for life, Mom's mine to keep Nights grow blind... this eternal sleep. Defying death, tears on the brink I may collapse, or faint and sink. To struggle on with every breath- Tears on the brink, defying death. Beautiful is she, moonglows end Upon my faith these thoughts depend-- On braving time though I foresee Moonglows end, beautiful is she. For Broken Wings' Contest A Poem About Death: Theme - this eternal sleep Form: Swap Quatrian 5/17/2018

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Date: 6/9/2018 5:45:00 AM
Can anything be more Beautiful than this, it is truly a piece of poetry at it s best, really beautiful and a joy to read,what will happen to us after our death is still a question, do consciousness exists after our body dies, if yes then will we continue to see a dream from which we never wakes, or will it pass, maybe a chance of heaven and hell, or it canbe darkness,total darkness not even darkness as our consciousness don t exist, many congratulations on your well deserved win, good luck
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Date: 6/6/2018 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations Nette. Tom.
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Date: 6/3/2018 5:24:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your winning write here. Very-well articulated. A definite pleasure to read and A FAVE TOO!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 6/2/2018 8:50:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, nette. Well done.
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Date: 6/1/2018 5:34:00 PM
hello Nette, this oem sounds like a winner to me. Good luck in the contest. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 5/29/2018 11:38:00 AM
Quite beautiful, Nette!
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Date: 5/28/2018 10:43:00 AM
Beautifully done, Nette.
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Date: 5/27/2018 12:41:00 AM
This is exquisite, Nette ... truly.
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Date: 5/26/2018 8:13:00 PM
Brilliant read. It's as if the words paint a picture of this profound poem. Hail to you. The pen is your gift. I must try this format. DKay
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Date: 5/21/2018 10:11:00 AM
My friend, you never fail in delivery such exceptionally crafted verse! A fav...
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Date: 5/20/2018 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your win. "Tears on the brink, defying death" .. great line.
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Date: 5/19/2018 10:40:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive write, well done ~
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Date: 5/19/2018 11:31:00 AM
What a beautiful haunting poem, made more by the swap quatrain! This is remarkable poetry. Congratulations on your win. A fave.
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Date: 5/18/2018 6:40:00 PM
Musings deep and faith-holding. You are such a good writer. Thank you for dropping in on mine.
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Date: 5/18/2018 3:24:00 PM
A really awesome poem, Nette! Congratulations on a well-deserved win!:-)
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Date: 5/18/2018 2:20:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/18/2018 12:30:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 2rd place in the contest, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/17/2018 11:15:00 AM
The depth of your language and feelings is well defined through this exquisite poem!
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Date: 5/17/2018 8:32:00 AM
A melancholy write, written beautifully!
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Date: 5/17/2018 8:03:00 AM
Beautifully written Nette! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 5/17/2018 6:48:00 AM
You wrote this well nette..enjoyed reading your swap quatrain. Apt theme for the contest..best for a win.
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