In Grief

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Regina Mcintosh.


Trembling, the ache
Still tender,
Unkept moments echo
Risking a prayer,
Where will the memory go?
How will my heart ever know
When to let go… how to let go?

Desperate, the sorrow
Holding her hand,
Just before her eyes closed
In death, a shell
Of the past, the heart and soul,
The woman who had once…
Bent to kiss away my tears,
Forever ago, down through the years,
Her light was still aglow…
Inside my heart, as were the tears.

Unsteady, my mind
Tremulous as the wind, ablaze
With fires of feeling, 
Tortured nights when the battle
With her memory tossed me
Like a sea of grief, 
Binding my dreams and warning me
To see beneath the sea of heartbreak,
Into the treasured festival of love,
Love poured out from her heart,
A heart who breathed…

Will I ever know… when to let go?
Is it even possible, to let go of the one
Who silenced my doubts, reassured 
My soul, gave me more love
Than my heart will ever hold, more love
Than my life would ever use up…

No. I won’t let go, can’t let go
She is the part of me that I know
Will forever show… forever breathe
Forever, with me, she is the seed
That gave me room to grow, room
To see… without her, I wouldn’t be me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/13/2023 6:25:00 PM
A sad tale of grieving. Don't let anyone tell you when it is time to let go. Only you will decide.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/13/2023 2:58:00 AM
Grief and sorrow so well expressed. Thank you.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/13/2023 1:54:00 AM
- A heartbreaking poem, Gina ... can feel the grief :( - hugs
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter