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In Flower Fields

The moon a shawl over her shoulders almost replacing his arms'embrace, In her wine-glass pools of light floating reflect the glow upon his face. His deep-set eyes like summer ripples carry her thought to tulip fields Recalling sunsets when she first saw him far from the city's unwinding streets. Next to the old mill on a soft blanket, patchworked from grass and falling leaves, Its there He whispered hundred sweet nothings The air was filled with a fragrant breeze. Throughout this night She wanders lonely Far from dry lands to evergreens, Sailing alone above blue waters to meet the author who built her dreams.

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John Castellenas

Date: 10/16/2020 3:54:00 AM

A wonderful poem shared dear Charmaine. A wonderful journey shared.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/6/2019 9:32:00 PM

Wistful...beautiful!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/22/2019 12:58:00 PM

Wonderful writing always enjoy your poems. love phyl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/10/2019 8:13:00 AM

I wanted to sail one more time. A great way to begin my day. Hugs Rick.

Tobey Hill

Date: 8/23/2019 1:14:00 PM

So nice to read you again old friend! Hope all is well in Maltaland. I really enjoyed this CC! Sounds like a lovely dreamworld...TAH

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/2/2019 1:44:00 AM

Hi Charmaine, A stunning piece, as only you can write. "to meet the author who built her dreams." Thank you. Panagiota

John Hamilton

Date: 7/26/2019 5:34:00 PM

So nice to have you back Charms to grace our humble site, your poetry sings of romance soo good!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/24/2019 8:15:00 AM

I so enjoyed giving this a second read.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/22/2019 9:09:00 AM

I like this, great imagery and feeling in this poem.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/20/2019 7:39:00 AM

Hi Charmaine: Good to see you back as you recharge your poetic batteries!

Silent One

Date: 7/14/2019 5:25:00 AM

Glad to see you posting and back to your best... your romantic writes are brilliant... that is a great last line, to meet the author who built her dreams.... that is God...

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/13/2019 4:10:00 PM

Hi Charmaine, I found the this to soooo romantic. The scene and mood just overflowed with romance. You write romantic so well. PS, It's great to see you posting again. I haven't been as active as I once was. But I just by to say hi and welcome back. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 7/13/2019 4:05:00 PM

your pen sings through a beautiful piece

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2019 7:34:00 PM

thus us wondrously romantic, Charma. So what has changed that makes it possible for us to see you here again?? (I'm happy for it!)

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/15/2019 1:32:00 AM

Hi Dear...I don't even know..I was writing a poem..and somehow I was carried here..I love being here if only time permits ..because once here ..Its hard not to keep reading poets..and time is a bummer these days.Hope you're doing fine sweet Andrea.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 7/10/2019 9:45:00 AM

I love your poetry - hope you will post more of it.

Edward Orozco

Date: 7/10/2019 8:52:00 AM

beautiful imagery, as if i was there seeing all of this take place. You are very talented Chairmaine <3

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/9/2019 5:48:00 PM

A smoothly flowing read with great feel and imagery.

Kenneth R. Merrill

Date: 7/8/2019 7:34:00 PM

A romantic, indeed. For whatever reason, rhyme has always been easier for me, but I believe I’ll refer to your wonderfully descriptive free verse for inspiration; after all, I studied free verse—and taught free verse, I should certainly be able to write it. And kudos for your masterful use of imagery!

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/9/2019 2:59:00 PM

Thanks for reading :)

James A.

Date: 7/8/2019 7:57:00 AM

That is pretty sweet. I am so glad you got back to doing what you are so great at doing!

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/8/2019 3:58:00 PM

Thanks so much

Lyric Man

Date: 7/8/2019 1:06:00 AM

Charms, Once again you write a magical, mysterious story that leaves me breathless and reading your work again and again. You are back with flare. I’m waiting impatiently for your next inspiration!

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/8/2019 3:58:00 PM

Thanks so much David.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/7/2019 1:08:00 AM

Perfect in every detail. Hugs Rick.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/8/2019 3:59:00 PM

Thanks so much

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/5/2019 1:04:00 PM

Lovely as can be, Charmaine. Such delicate, unforced imagery. Very, very nicely done. Best wishes, Gershon

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/8/2019 4:01:00 PM

Thanks so much.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 7/5/2019 12:06:00 PM

I sense a lovely tribute to someone who inspired you! Beautiful reading.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/8/2019 4:02:00 PM

Thanks so much

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/5/2019 10:44:00 AM

Such a lovely piece Charmaine, real great imagery and fine insightful thoughts.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/8/2019 4:02:00 PM

Thanks for reading

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/5/2019 10:35:00 AM

Charmaine! This is lovely. You are the person who inspired me to write. It was over a year ago when I first read you. I started to be a Souper five months ago. Your poetry always touches my heart. Thank you for yet another dazzling gem of your artistry. Panagiota Romios

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/8/2019 4:04:00 PM

Thanks so much Dear.Am so happy my simple scribbles reached you :).