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In February

Illnesses besetting Parents aging Chilled waves of anxiety buffet the shore Thunderclouds dampening soil and spirits Cellos, subdued in minor sonority play Eleanor Rigby in my mind Painted ponies gnashing at their metallic captivity In February Health returning Sandpipers scatter as we approach Collecting shells with smiling mother Children's laughter rains down on half-filled sand pails Thundering gales of glee as they test the frigid ocean Trumpets dance to the melodic riff of Good Day, Sunshine The painted ponies go up and down, 'round and 'round the brass ring again in sight In February

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Date: 5/11/2020 7:35:00 PM
I hear the music, John, not only in the songs but in the sound of the sea, laughter, "thundering gales of glee," "melodic riff" - that's the guitar player surfacing - "cellos in minor sonority." Really nicely done my friend. Congratulations on your win!
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John Watt
Date: 5/11/2020 8:37:00 PM
Slammin' Sam, you nailed it again with your careful reading and analysis. Yes, music was definitely my lexicon for this counterpoint of contrasts. So wonderful to read your comments, and know they come from such a gifted poet and true friend! Thank you for being you ~ John
Date: 3/2/2020 6:14:00 PM
Delightful, truly delightful... I am so happy I found your poetry today John. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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John Watt
Date: 3/2/2020 10:27:00 PM
Grateful for the lovely comment!
Date: 2/26/2020 7:38:00 PM
you've weaved some good songs through your imagery and thoughts in this one! I like how you set this one up...it flows along nicely...great poem John~ hugs
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John Watt
Date: 2/26/2020 8:16:00 PM
Always love hearing from you, Sandra and I appreciate your encouragement, especially about the flow and the songs. Hugs ~ John
Date: 2/26/2020 1:34:00 PM
So many moments caress, in Feb. It is the Love Month- of course. :) I hope all is well in your world, my dear friend. Keep reaching for the stars. Sharing your amazing poetry. When clouds linger, the sunshine will always grace us with its presence. :) Brandy
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John Watt
Date: 2/26/2020 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy. Your kind thoughts always leave me with a smile ~ John
Date: 2/26/2020 8:51:00 AM
WoW! John, Now that’s I call a free verse! Good content and imagery. Great job. If it’s for the contest, I wish you the best of luck in it. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/26/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Alexis for your read and thoughtful comment. Blessings to you, John
Date: 2/25/2020 10:20:00 PM
Sounds like a 'Tale of Two Hemispheres!' But I don't mean to make light of a very impressive write. Kudos, John! :) Gershon
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John Watt
Date: 2/26/2020 11:29:00 PM
Gershon, you are true in what you say. In many parts of the world people go swimming in February sunshine! But there still can be sadness and hope ~ Thank you, my friend
Date: 2/25/2020 9:15:00 PM
ok, now THIS is very good free verse, my friend. You used some great unusual metaphors and imagery in this one. I love how you extended the rain/thunder metaphor and put it all in Feb. both the good and the bad. Excellent, john!
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Date: 2/26/2020 11:24:00 PM
I greatly appreciate your kind words and your seeing the rain/thunder motif ~ John
Date: 2/25/2020 9:13:00 PM
I forgot to say in my soupmail, thanks for what you said about my tanka. Ok, let me read this newest poem of yours!
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John Watt
Date: 2/26/2020 11:22:00 PM
You're welcome, friend!
Date: 2/25/2020 7:06:00 PM
Nice description Johnny Watts...usually Feb gets a bad rap...My younger and better-looking brother was born on Fri Feb 13'th...all the best my friend from the wingster...^WW^ :o)
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John Watt
Date: 2/26/2020 9:38:00 AM
Hey Wings, love your nicknames for people - Johnny makes me feel young again! Thanks again for more uplifting words
Date: 2/25/2020 6:58:00 PM
Love the songs dancing through your head in February..great oldies!
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John Watt
Date: 2/26/2020 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I love 'em too!

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