In February

Illnesses besetting
Parents aging
Chilled waves of anxiety
     buffet the shore
Thunderclouds dampening
     soil and spirits
Cellos, subdued in minor sonority
     play Eleanor Rigby in my mind
Painted ponies gnashing
     at their metallic captivity
In February

Health returning
Sandpipers scatter as we approach
Collecting shells 
     with smiling mother
Children's laughter rains down
     on half-filled sand pails
Thundering gales of glee
     as they test the frigid ocean
Trumpets dance to the melodic riff
     of Good Day, Sunshine
The painted ponies go up and down,
     'round and 'round
     the brass ring again in sight
In February

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Date: 5/11/2020 7:35:00 PM
I hear the music, John, not only in the songs but in the sound of the sea, laughter, "thundering gales of glee," "melodic riff" - that's the guitar player surfacing - "cellos in minor sonority." Really nicely done my friend. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/11/2020 8:37:00 PM
Slammin' Sam, you nailed it again with your careful reading and analysis. Yes, music was definitely my lexicon for this counterpoint of contrasts. So wonderful to read your comments, and know they come from such a gifted poet and true friend! Thank you for being you ~ John
Date: 3/2/2020 6:14:00 PM
Delightful, truly delightful... I am so happy I found your poetry today John. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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John Watt
Date: 3/2/2020 10:27:00 PM
Grateful for the lovely comment!
Date: 2/26/2020 7:38:00 PM
you've weaved some good songs through your imagery and thoughts in this one! I like how you set this one up...it flows along nicely...great poem John~ hugs
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John Watt
Date: 2/26/2020 8:16:00 PM
Always love hearing from you, Sandra and I appreciate your encouragement, especially about the flow and the songs. Hugs ~ John
Date: 2/26/2020 1:34:00 PM
So many moments caress, in Feb. It is the Love Month- of course. :) I hope all is well in your world, my dear friend. Keep reaching for the stars. Sharing your amazing poetry. When clouds linger, the sunshine will always grace us with its presence. :) Brandy
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Date: 2/26/2020 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy. Your kind thoughts always leave me with a smile ~ John
Date: 2/26/2020 8:51:00 AM
WoW! John, Now that’s I call a free verse! Good content and imagery. Great job. If it’s for the contest, I wish you the best of luck in it. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/26/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Alexis for your read and thoughtful comment. Blessings to you, John
Date: 2/25/2020 10:20:00 PM
Sounds like a 'Tale of Two Hemispheres!' But I don't mean to make light of a very impressive write. Kudos, John! :) Gershon
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Date: 2/26/2020 11:29:00 PM
Gershon, you are true in what you say. In many parts of the world people go swimming in February sunshine! But there still can be sadness and hope ~ Thank you, my friend
Date: 2/25/2020 9:15:00 PM
ok, now THIS is very good free verse, my friend. You used some great unusual metaphors and imagery in this one. I love how you extended the rain/thunder metaphor and put it all in Feb. both the good and the bad. Excellent, john!
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Date: 2/26/2020 11:24:00 PM
I greatly appreciate your kind words and your seeing the rain/thunder motif ~ John
Date: 2/25/2020 9:13:00 PM
I forgot to say in my soupmail, thanks for what you said about my tanka. Ok, let me read this newest poem of yours!
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John Watt
Date: 2/26/2020 11:22:00 PM
You're welcome, friend!
Date: 2/25/2020 7:06:00 PM
Nice description Johnny Watts...usually Feb gets a bad rap...My younger and better-looking brother was born on Fri Feb 13'th...all the best my friend from the wingster...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 2/26/2020 9:38:00 AM
Hey Wings, love your nicknames for people - Johnny makes me feel young again! Thanks again for more uplifting words
Date: 2/25/2020 6:58:00 PM
Love the songs dancing through your head in February..great oldies!
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Date: 2/26/2020 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I love 'em too!
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