Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Imagism

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In Every Snowflake I Behold

Magnificent Willow stands in silent prayer, 
                                        calm and composed,
                                 so does the unruffled Evergreen, 
                                stretching its arms in thankfulness, 
                              decked with shimmering snow-pellets, 
                    gleaming and glistening as the countless stars are, 
                  in the absolute harmony of the magnanimous cosmos
                                      Majestic jewellery adorned.
 
                                                It's Christmas!
                  symbolizing the spirit of kindness, love, compassion, joy...
                              I glimpse through the hazy window-panes, 
                              world around me dazzling with shiny snow,
                           reminiscences of many delightful Christmas days
                                         roll through my thoughts,
                                 an open album of heartfelt memories!
                                  Of boxes, ribbons, and golden bows,
                                    sprinkles, silver bells, and cookies... 
                                        of family rejoicing together...
                            of extending generous support to the needy. 


                                        A tranquil, serene night, 
                     mesmerizing snow, falling uninterrupted, unhindered,
                                 envelop the entire universe around me. 
                                 I ponder my life of multi-coloured hues,
                                        in every snowflake I behold, 
                                the inspiring dreams, the fervent hopes, 
                                             the intense ebullience - 
                                              for ever crystallized.

                                 
                                  A Strand - 1046 Poetry Contest
                                        Sponsor: Brian Strand
                                              FIRST PLACE

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Connie Marcum Wong January 7, 2022 at 10:37 PM WOW! Mala, you took me on your memorable journey of colors and lights that reflect in those snowflakes with enchanted blessings of the season. This is just superb from beginning to end! I loved it! Congratulations on your wonderful win.New year blessings xxoo Malabika Ray Choudhury January 8, 2022 at 8:19 AM Thanks, Connie. Snowflake is my favourite image - although I did not grow up in Canada, I feel serene when it snows, especially at midnight.

Sam Kauffman January 7, 2022 at 11:40 AM "I ponder my life in multi-colored hues in every snowflake I behold." This is so beautiful Mala! Your wonder and awe of life comes shining through your words "ever crystallized." The snowflake is a perfect metaphor of life lived then re-lived in primal round. Congratulations on your win! Sending you blessings of wonder and awe for the new year dear friend. Sam Malabika Ray Choudhury January 8, 2022 at 8:17 AM Thank you, Sam. Snowflake is my favourite metaphor - I feel amazed at the beauty!

Craig Bowden January 6, 2022 at 11:55 PM Wonderful imagery. Congrats on your win. Malabika Ray Choudhury January 7, 2022 at 6:30 AM Thank you, Craig. Really appreciate your comment.

Debra L Brown November 28, 2021 at 8:31 PM What a beautiful picture you have drawn with your words.enjoyed, Blessings ~ Debra Malabika Ray Choudhury January 7, 2022 at 6:29 AM Thank you, Debra. Really appreciate your comment.

Valsa George November 28, 2021 at 7:48 PM Lovely....! Can picture the fleecy snowflakes falling down and resting softly on the ground and on the willow and the evergreen. The tranquil Christmas night brings in the memories of sweet family reunions ! Well done Malabika.... Malabika Ray Choudhury January 7, 2022 at 6:29 AM Thank you, Valsa. Really appreciate your comment.