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In Ellen's Wake

I’ve moved amongst raging white caps With the wind and spray and stinging flaps A now meaningless course with little chance The final few steps of my ship’s last dance My hands release the spinning wheel Now just a piece of useless steel I now await the crash of the wave I'm so alone, no need to be brave She sailed with me across the seas Once more I want to feel her breeze Grant my wish my Neptune please I miss her fair winds and following seas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/28/2018 7:01:00 PM
Hello Jerry,I felt that i was partof your poem while i read. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 3/1/2018 3:55:00 AM
Thanks, and may you have a great day
Date: 2/25/2018 11:53:00 AM
Elegant melancholy Jerry. A beautiful, emotional and deep metaphoric poem. Superb and heartfelt! Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/25/2018 4:22:00 PM
Susan, Thanks, I never thought of melancholy but your are correct, thanks again
Date: 2/24/2018 4:47:00 PM
Still a FAVE for me. Back with congrats, Jerry.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/25/2018 4:24:00 PM
And I'm back with a thanks...Thanks.
Date: 2/24/2018 3:33:00 PM
This lovely piece is tinged with sadness. So well-written Jerry! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/25/2018 4:24:00 PM
Connie, Thank you very much.
Date: 2/24/2018 1:53:00 PM
Nice write Jerry, nice placement, thanks for your entry!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/25/2018 4:23:00 PM
Joh, thanks. Folks like you make PS a nice place to visit.
Date: 2/4/2018 9:23:00 AM
Lovely, beautiful poem. The title leaves you wondering if it's more than the name of the ship and that adds another depth to the read. A FAVE for me.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/6/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thanks, yes I like the title too.
Date: 2/4/2018 8:55:00 AM
Beautiful eloquent piece Jerry, lump in the throat affecting. Hugs mo
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/5/2018 3:47:00 AM
Thanks Mo
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/5/2018 3:47:00 AM
Thanks Mo

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