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In Effortless Glide - Air Balloons


In effortless glide
Amidst the invisible thermals
Air balloons do soar

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Carol Sunshine Brown

January 14, 2011 at 4:01 AM

Congratulations James on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol

Kash Poet

January 10, 2011 at 10:52 PM

Congrats james on your well deserved win in this Haiku contest!

Poet Destroyer A

January 10, 2011 at 5:46 PM

James,, coolio,&, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.

Sharon Ruebel

January 10, 2011 at 3:07 PM

Hello James, Congratulations on your win for this lovely Haiku. Well done. As Always, Shar

Michael J. Falotico

January 10, 2011 at 2:51 PM

Great to see your name in the winners circle my friend,,,Congrats to you !!!!

Robert Pettit

January 10, 2011 at 2:19 PM

Reading this reminds me of the hit song "Up Up and Away" by the Fifth Dimension. It must be fun to ride in a balloon. No wonder you won with this entry!

Daniel Cwiak

January 10, 2011 at 10:13 AM

Soar some more, James! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Sara Kendrick

January 10, 2011 at 8:24 AM

Great one..Let the soaring begin..Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 10, 2011 at 7:37 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, james

Andrea Dietrich

January 10, 2011 at 7:15 AM

Congratulations, James. Nice to see this one soaring up there in the top! Luv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

January 10, 2011 at 3:02 AM

Congratulations James with this gem making it to the winner's list ;-) WN

Tahera Mannan

January 10, 2011 at 2:56 AM

Many congratulations for this wonderful win james.

Nette Onclaud

January 10, 2011 at 12:10 AM

lovely!! cheesr for the win in this contest, james! :) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 9, 2011 at 11:42 PM

Congrats James on your super success in Irma's hot air balloon contest with this magical ride.. enjoy your free flight to the top of the charts with luv..

Skat A

January 9, 2011 at 10:09 PM

JAMES, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUR WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT

De R

December 12, 2010 at 10:19 AM

A great image painted by you little haiku, James. This is so cute:) Hugs, Emilia:)

Wilma Neels

December 9, 2010 at 11:27 AM

What an image James!! love it, all the best for the contest.. Hope your week's been a good one ;) xx

Audrey Haick

December 7, 2010 at 9:35 AM

I love this picture, James..especially the phrase..."invisible thermals"! This picture will hang on my fav. list! Love, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

December 6, 2010 at 10:35 PM

cool line that second part!! Good luck in the contest, James.

Carolyn Devonshire

December 6, 2010 at 4:35 PM

A creative approach with a scientific feel to it, James! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 6, 2010 at 2:35 PM

Quite creative and imaginative entry in the contest, Good luck. James

Francine Roberts

December 6, 2010 at 2:11 PM

lovely entry for the cotnest James, best of luck

James Fraser

December 6, 2010 at 2:11 PM

Thank you Constance for your kind comments. There was a balloon above my Haiku, to make the poem a little more realistic. Once you save something like this, it all goes pear shaped. Maybe it's about time the Soup had a preview page, and in turn what your satisfied with , is what turns out. The Concrete form would then be more challengeable to many poets who have steered clear of it. Basically I have wasted just over an hour of my time....:(