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In Eden's Beauty

if only i could paragraph your halcyon breath, i’d encompass your essence in eden’s beauty our lips avowed in a kiss held in an abyss of lingering reminiscence, never seized in laden avails- solitude no more consensually seeking the same connection of a mirrored reflection that sees an adoring image, and never being able to unlove you i ache for your touch- for it outweighs any fallacy i may encounter in my life you long for my eyes- for you see a whole new world of love and passion through them i consider all the ways i can prove my dedication of vows sworn; phrases of metaphors and syllables to announce just how blessed i am to have your lips brush up against mine ~for all time~ etch me at eventide so that my silhouette may embrace elegance under the soft moonlight splendor... grace me with sweet surrender temperature high caressing your velveteen skin; you take me to paradise with one breath on my nape no mount can keep us apart as i bathe in the glory of love’s cascading affection my aspiration is this… to encompass OUR essence in eden’s beauty ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ date revised 12.18.19

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Date: 12/21/2019 4:26:00 AM
This is beautiful! Sincere congratulations on your win in Sir Brian's contest, Laura - best wishes and blessings to you and yours for a Merry Christmas! Keep up the great work, my friend! :o) <3
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/21/2019 12:35:00 PM
thank you dear man :) may your holidays be full of laughter and joy- enjoy your family this time of year especially dear Greg. hugs to you- x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/21/2019 4:13:00 AM
Laura first off WOW! This was gorgeous! Secondly congratulations on your top win!;)
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Date: 12/21/2019 12:34:00 PM
thank you sweet lady- Merry Christmas! x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/19/2019 4:33:00 PM
Ok Laura you got me...what a beautiful dedication to love...another classic write! I bathe in the glory of love's cascading affection...love it!
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Date: 12/21/2019 12:34:00 PM
thank you sweet friend! x:-)-luloo

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