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In Defense of My Romantic Poetry

I’m a hopeless romantic Now please cut me some slack Yes, there’s more to this life Than love’s beaten track I just can’t write about fish And I can’t write of the farm I can’t write about frogs For me that holds not a charm I can’t write about wars And I can’t write about keys I can’t write of history Go easy on me, please! Yes, I guess I’m limited Stuck in mediocrity I’m trying to be diverse It falls flat, can’t you see? So I write tales of love And I write about passion Can’t write about trends Or the latest fashion I write about suicide And I write of addiction I write about my life Not some sort of fiction I write about my daughter And I write about hubby I write how much I suffer To be thin and not chubby I write about God And I write about heaven But can’t write about 9 Much less about seven So please hear what I say What you all write is grand It’s just not my way I’m stuck in love’s brand I’m cheesy, I’m sappy, Dripping with goo and such But this hopeless romantic Loves your poems so much! Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Date: 2/21/2014 5:00:00 PM
No defence required. You are a gift to the world.
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Date: 2/17/2013 7:36:00 PM
Eileen; This is very beautiful. People write about different things, as for me I myself can not write much about love. I write about other things. The beauty of poetry is that people write about different thing, if everybody wrote about the samething. It would really be boreing. Thanks for sharing and keep writing love poems. Lucilla
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Date: 1/31/2013 12:53:00 PM
What a reward for stopping by; I too am a romantic and did my share of saying so. Your poem is beautiful, with a touch of humor and confession that makes it top notch. I so enjoyed this. Elizabeth
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/31/2013 1:01:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, Elizabeth! Glad you enjoyed it! :)
Date: 1/30/2013 12:05:00 PM
Stay Romantic!!!We need more romantics in this world.Beautiful poem.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/30/2013 6:43:00 PM
Thanks, Kash. Sweet of you! :)
Date: 1/30/2013 9:55:00 AM
Gorgeous poem... love it my dear Eilenn! Hugs, Jack
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/30/2013 10:03:00 AM
Thanks, Jack! I'm really touched that you took the time to read and post! :)
Date: 1/30/2013 3:30:00 AM
Eileen, absolutly no need to apologize.. your poetry, is uplifting, heartfelt,, but most of all, it is truth in as much as what you put in to your poems is you, you create magic for others, and a smile, and affection, it does not get much better than that.....
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/30/2013 4:44:00 AM
Harryyyyyyyyyyyy! Thanks ever so much for this lovely post and the sentiments it conveys! I do appreciate it ever so much! Blessings!
Date: 1/29/2013 2:19:00 PM
This was a lot of fun, I for one love how you write. Have a great day. Thanks for your visit and comment on my smile poem.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/29/2013 8:45:00 PM
Richard....it is reciprocal! Believe me! :) Thanks for the taking the time to read! :)
Date: 1/29/2013 2:08:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful poem, I love this poem. Nicely done poet
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/29/2013 2:11:00 PM
Thank you, my dear! Very sweet of you!
Date: 1/29/2013 7:10:00 AM
good poem. I like your honesty - JH
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/29/2013 1:37:00 PM
Thanks, JH! :) Honesty is the best policy as they say........
Date: 1/29/2013 7:09:00 AM
Remember...so they tell me....no one need apologize here on soup for being themselves... this was so cute though!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/29/2013 1:37:00 PM
Thanks, Donna! :) You are so so sweet! God bless!
Date: 1/29/2013 3:47:00 AM
Dear Eilleen, Just to remind you that when Zeus decided to create the world he transformed Himself into Eros, the love God, in order to unite the opposites. St. John Tells us (First Epist.} that God is love! So, you have the two most powerful allies to defend you. No need to do it yourself! Great poem in defense of romanticism which by the way, is not a crime! Ha-ha! Thank you for sharing!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/29/2013 1:33:00 PM
Demetrios, than you for your vote of confidence! I appreciate it ever so much! Glad that I have a great poet and philosopher like you to defend my little poem! Filakia!

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