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In Dark Abyss

When I am arising onto the earth We have reached the rainbow's edge Hastily tumbling into the unknown I've utterly joined the maze of the riddle Swamp yourself within the chasm Of the most intense sleep Straight ahead, I'm going to sprint Towards your most profound insights Frights and Demons have vanished You are being rung as an atoning victim I will surely bear at your polished side Until dawn break through the darkness
Written: March 27, 2022
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Brown Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 11:23 AM
Sotto, this was a poem to ponder. I like how you described dreams "maze of the riddle.", enjoyed, Blessings ~ Debra
Horsman Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Being i was scared of the dark when a child, this awesome poem of yours took me back there. Always relieved when dawn broke. Great poetry, Lasaad.
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 4:13 AM
Uplifting thoughts--emerging from darkness.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:16 AM
Lovely poem. We wait for light of day. Well done.
George Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:03 PM
Until dawn breaks, we are in the abyss of darkness. So let us wait for dawn's arrival ! Meaningful poem , dear friend.
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