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In Cool Waters of Her Mind

In Cool Waters of Her Mind (Collaboration with Keith) In cool waters of her peaceful mind are rare pools of depth unknown, and wonder-pearls most rare to find, lie great treasure there alone Many reach them, yet none can but often, in his lonely night --- she smiles upon some weary man, and all his heavy burden grows light Should the wind whisper a thousand names, from her lips giving soft-love to each, a peck for hope in dire days; though the world be doused in darkest heat In coolness the waters doth breathe shiny-secrets, where hope is found in hallowed halls, no darkness, despair, nor regrets ---- lavishing in cool, speckled waterfalls First two stanzas written by Robert Lindley Last two stanzas written by Keith O.J. Hunt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/10/2016 7:25:00 AM
The honor was mine Robert to compose with you. You launched a pretty little piece of peace that caters to hope.All the best, and God bless, Keith
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Date: 12/9/2016 10:46:00 AM
This is a great collaboration enjoyed this read very much, pretty seamless the write although the writing style difference was obvious, the feel was harmonious.
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Date: 12/9/2016 9:22:00 AM
You guys work well together! I enjoyed it immensely! Well done guys...
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Date: 12/9/2016 9:17:00 AM
BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! and a 7 of course! Excellent collaboration! What else can I say when I am so totally blown away by the brilliance of this piece! WOW!
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