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In Chains

caught up in your
interpretation of reality
the nightmare repeats
in neverending loops

within confines
you’re your own prisoner
where in truth
there exists no bars

your cell a fabrication of illusion
that keeps you down and chained
unable to see the freedom
that awaits you
just beyond



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on August 20, 2020 for contest WOMAN IN CHAINS sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON  -  RANKED 4TH
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Hamilton Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Nice write Line, congrats on a nice placement!
Gauthier Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 4:12 AM
Thanks, John ~
Mcintosh Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 10:10 AM
Lovely write and entry. God bless you my friend
Gauthier Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Thank you very much, Regina. Most appreciated.
Michael Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 8:01 AM
Very real...Once created in mind...such is the power of thought...Maybe one day we'll control it at will...
Gauthier Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 8:08 AM
We have a long way to go ~ thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Arturo.
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