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In Bloom

The wind passes like a powerful current through my face surface; as a serpent making love to the flowers, trees, deserts, rivers, and ocean leaving them peak a thousand hertz. All that's left is its exquisite scents in its pace. Her lamp hangs over as bright as a campfire embrace; So lovely to give me warmth to tame And those who live to quench her flickering flame. The beauty of my ageless soul in a meadow of gold. So many episodes put into words and secrets it does hold. 2/24/2023 In Bloom Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 3/8/2023 10:44:00 AM
Back with congratulations Eve. Had a feeling this would find a place on the podium! Blessings!
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Date: 3/7/2023 4:33:00 PM
Wonderful write Eve, Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/7/2023 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "In Bloom" is a beautiful write. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 3/6/2023 6:24:00 PM
A lovely and well-crafted poem, Eve. Congratulations on your top-winning placement.
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Date: 2/26/2023 5:10:00 AM
Great use of words here, Eve:)
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Date: 2/25/2023 11:20:00 PM
Beautiful, I loved the last line!
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Date: 2/25/2023 7:30:00 AM
Your words bloom like spring in this delightful poem, Eve. Wonderful images you convey.
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Date: 2/25/2023 2:07:00 AM
Your imagery is of great calibre. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 2/24/2023 4:24:00 PM
Very clever rhyme of current/serpent, and the range of flowers to deserts to oceans is so beautiful, hope this is a winner for you~
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Date: 2/24/2023 1:19:00 PM
So lovely Eve! I can feel the breeze and so clearly see the scenery. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings dear friend!
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