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In Anticipation of You

Peering around the edges of the yellow-orange sky dancing under cover of the morning mist gently you tickle my cheek whisper good morning my love onto my once shut slumbered eyes greet me with your perfect smile leave me breathless in wake of your beauty and remind me of why why my mornings are brighter why it's great to be alive The hummingbird flutters out in the meadow sucking nectar from the most beautiful wildflower and my thoughts turn to you and to us our last night kiss how you gave to me your heart butterflies flutter inside of me and I know be it slow or fast racing to your arms or just waiting my heart beats in anticipation of you

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Date: 3/14/2017 8:44:00 AM
Love it! I can relate.
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Date: 3/14/2017 3:06:00 AM
That is so beautiful. It is why we should never stop dreaming, and why our alternate, poetic, reality is so important. Never stop dreaming, never stop writing my friend.
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Date: 3/13/2017 9:16:00 PM
Tim Tim Tim. All I can say is keep seeing the hummingbirds and feeling the butterflies. May they both surround you always. This is beautiful poetry. Honestly. Well done
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:04:00 PM
So very touching - hope your lover reads it. She'll never leave you!
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:01:00 PM
Breathtaking. Whatever your putting in your wheaties... I'll take a crate..lol Your writing is amazing, A beauty Tim.:-) fave, 7+ blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/13/2017 6:42:00 PM
Oh this is so romantic Tim <3 I love every word of it :) A fave!
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Date: 3/13/2017 6:07:00 PM
That's it, Doctor replace both my knees! I want to write like this!!
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Date: 3/13/2017 4:22:00 PM
Oh ..I'll be your bridesmaid Timothy : ).. This is such a beautiful romantic poem ..You're on a roll today.Have to favour this.
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Date: 3/13/2017 4:21:00 PM
Very nice Tim! :)
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Date: 3/13/2017 4:10:00 PM
- Romantic and beautiful lines, Tim - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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