In Another Time

Deep down I know that you would still be here
wearing that ring I gave you by the beach
me, basking in that warmth having you near
all that I ever wanted in arm's reach.
Head tilted to one side your eyes would ask
what lingered on my mind as my gaze swept
your face, giving no clues beneath my mask
of all the feelings for you that I kept.
Priorities back then came to the fore
between both them and us you made me choose
with hindsight now, if you had known the score
you never would have asked, knowing you'd lose.

Though 'in another time' is just a phrase
the choices that we make cement our days.


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Warrior Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Congrats!!! my friend...on your well-deserved win...god bless...^WW^
Wigley Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Cheers, double W, much appreciated. Regards, Viv
Haight Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 9:23 AM
Such a heartfelt and emotional Sonnet, Viv. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short winner's list. Sandra
Wigley Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Thanks Sandra, a goodly crop, methinks. Viv x
Neumann Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:31 AM
The choices that we make cement our days, though they are not written in stone. I like this poem.
Wigley Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Thanks Kai, very kind. Regards, Viv
Zink Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 12:34 AM
Great write Viv! Congrats on making the top ten! As I read these poems again prior to my comments, I am always second guessing my placements. This poem is excellent!
Wigley Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 12:56 AM
Thanks IZ, an interesting theme and good contest. Regards, Viv
Y. Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 12:33 AM
Hi Viv, Congratulations on your fine win: -) Alexis
Wigley Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 12:57 AM
Thanks, Alexis, a goodly crop of entries, fine stuff. Viv
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 4:57 PM
oh just now seeing your note to me here. Let me go to soupmail.
Murray Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:17 AM
Ah ViV....what's for us...I ended up with three extra beautiful daughters. And you have someone to bounce crossword puzzles off that can still light your fire....
Smith Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 1:18 AM
I like bit about question being asked in particular. Ultimatums mostly backfire. My wife and I had a few of those moments. We got past them but hard. needed to step back a bit for some perspective. Accusing your partner of doing nothing is not a good idea especially because almost always never true. Learned that hard way. I like seeing how other people approach contests. So m,any different angles to approach from. Good Luck from David
Wigley Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 12:25 AM
Thanks, David. Some of the worst conflicts in relationships are caused by such black and white issues, little room for compromise. We are complex creatures. Regards, Viv
Callus Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Full marks for this lovely sonnet, Viv. Hopefully our choices do not leave much space for regrets! Regards // paul
Wigley Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 11:22 PM
We met in January 1985 and got engaged in July 1985 in Jersey, during the Live Aid concert weekend. Head over heels in love is such a cliche, but she knocked me for six. Sadly, family came first, which is why I care for my younger brother after my parent's demise, and it was a price she coudn't pay. Such is life. Thanks for dropping by, hope you and your good lady are ticketty boo. Regards, Viv
Dietrich Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 9:55 AM
Love what you did with this topic, Viv. I wish you well in the contest. I used an oldie. Wasn't sure what he wanted. I sure enjoyed how you treated the theme.
Wigley Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 11:27 PM
Yes, an open ended theme, I wasn't sure either. hope you do well, and you are well- can you Soupmail any updates? Viv x
Gupta Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 7:04 AM
Lovely and profound ...
Wigley Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 11:28 PM
Thanks, Probir, I don't normally dwell on such things, but such is life.... Regards, Viv
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