In Another Time

in another time
I wore black Mary Jane shoes
walking a poodle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 10:32 AM
I can see the scene. Congrats. Sara
Walker Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 12:08 PM
Sara, thank you. Writing this haiku brought back some amusing memories for me. ~ Sonia
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:16 PM
Oh this is cute! Love the contrast...as if the poodle on the skirt walk along!
Walker Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:36 PM
Kim, I had fun with this one. Thank you, Sonia.
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:36 PM
what a fun image this shows! Congrats in the contest, Sonia
Walker Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:38 PM
Andrea, your sincerity is so appreciated. ~ Sonia
Roper Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:28 PM
Imagery is picturesque, Sonia, nicely done, congratulations on your win !
Walker Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Deborah, thank you for the Honorable Placement. ~ Sonia
Beachboard Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 5:55 PM
Ah! Brings back childhood memories. nice write.
Gauthier Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 5:44 PM
Congrats on your win, Sonia.
Walker Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Line, thank you for liking my poodle skirt. All the best, Sonia.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 6:08 PM
Love the imagery! A poodle skirt? Congrats on your win!
Walker Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 8:09 PM
Kim, it was a nice surprise to receive a win on my Haiku. Thank you. ~ Sonia
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January 14, 2017 at 3:07 PM
congrats on your win, Sonia.
Walker Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 5:57 PM
Agnes, my Mary Jane shoes are dancing as well as the poodle on my skirt. Thank you for your support. ~ Sonia
Poteet Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 2:52 PM
That makes us about the same age, Sonia. Those Mary Janes, I don't think I ever had a pair, but the poodle skirt is another story. Congrats on your win.
Walker Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 6:04 PM
I remember owning a pair of black patented-leathered Mary Janes for dress up with cute white-lace trimmed socks. Those were the days... Thank you for your kindness. ~ Sonia
Lawless Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 1:18 PM
Sonia, I loved this one. I can still remember the shoes and the skirts with the poodle on them. Thanks for participating in the contest.
Walker Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 6:07 PM
John, I appreciate the opportunity for wearing my black Mary Jane shoes and poodle skirt for your contest. Thank you for the placement of my poem. Congratulations to the other poets who won. ~ Sonia
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Love the humour here Sonia congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Walker Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 11:14 AM
Jan, thank you for appreciating the humor within this Haiku. ~ Sonia
Lane Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 8:52 AM
well done and congrats, Sonia.
Walker Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Thank you, Lin Lane. I woke up this morning to your encouraging news about my placement within the contest. My coffee and bagel with cream cheese will taste much better. Have a great day, Sonia.
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