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IN ANOTHER TIME

in another time I wore black Mary Jane shoes walking a poodle

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Date: 3/2/2018 10:32:00 AM
I can see the scene. Congrats. Sara
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Sonia Walker
Date: 3/2/2018 12:08:00 PM
Sara, thank you. Writing this haiku brought back some amusing memories for me. ~ Sonia
Date: 3/1/2018 8:16:00 PM
Oh this is cute! Love the contrast...as if the poodle on the skirt walk along!
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Sonia Walker
Date: 3/1/2018 8:36:00 PM
Kim, I had fun with this one. Thank you, Sonia.
Date: 3/1/2018 7:36:00 PM
what a fun image this shows! Congrats in the contest, Sonia
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Sonia Walker
Date: 3/1/2018 8:38:00 PM
Andrea, your sincerity is so appreciated. ~ Sonia
Date: 3/1/2018 7:28:00 PM
Imagery is picturesque, Sonia, nicely done, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 3/1/2018 6:54:00 PM
Deborah, thank you for the Honorable Placement. ~ Sonia
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Date: 3/1/2018 5:55:00 PM
Ah! Brings back childhood memories. nice write.
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Date: 3/1/2018 5:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sonia.
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Sonia Walker
Date: 3/1/2018 6:55:00 PM
Line, thank you for liking my poodle skirt. All the best, Sonia.
Date: 1/14/2017 6:08:00 PM
Love the imagery! A poodle skirt? Congrats on your win!
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Sonia Walker
Date: 1/14/2017 8:09:00 PM
Kim, it was a nice surprise to receive a win on my Haiku. Thank you. ~ Sonia
Date: 1/14/2017 3:07:00 PM
congrats on your win, Sonia.
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Sonia Walker
Date: 1/14/2017 5:57:00 PM
Agnes, my Mary Jane shoes are dancing as well as the poodle on my skirt. Thank you for your support. ~ Sonia
Date: 1/14/2017 2:52:00 PM
That makes us about the same age, Sonia. Those Mary Janes, I don't think I ever had a pair, but the poodle skirt is another story. Congrats on your win.
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Sonia Walker
Date: 1/14/2017 6:04:00 PM
I remember owning a pair of black patented-leathered Mary Janes for dress up with cute white-lace trimmed socks. Those were the days... Thank you for your kindness. ~ Sonia
Date: 1/14/2017 1:18:00 PM
Sonia, I loved this one. I can still remember the shoes and the skirts with the poodle on them. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Sonia Walker
Date: 1/14/2017 6:07:00 PM
John, I appreciate the opportunity for wearing my black Mary Jane shoes and poodle skirt for your contest. Thank you for the placement of my poem. Congratulations to the other poets who won. ~ Sonia
Date: 8/30/2016 11:04:00 AM
Love the humour here Sonia congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sonia Walker
Date: 8/30/2016 11:14:00 AM
Jan, thank you for appreciating the humor within this Haiku. ~ Sonia
Date: 8/30/2016 8:52:00 AM
well done and congrats, Sonia.
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Sonia Walker
Date: 8/30/2016 9:47:00 AM
Thank you, Lin Lane. I woke up this morning to your encouraging news about my placement within the contest. My coffee and bagel with cream cheese will taste much better. Have a great day, Sonia.