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In Another Life

 

In another life I could be happy,
have no grief or forever sad sorrow,
would not have another day unhappy,
wish another life could be my 'morrow.
Would I still love the song of a sparrow ? 
Oh, would I still be a poem writer ?
You see my life has made me a fighter,
with a fire burning bright within me.
Would I still be a story reciter ?
Oh, in another life who would I be ?

Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2025

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thriveni c mysore Date: 3/2/2025 7:04:00 PM you took the title to new heights dear poet, 'The wound is the place where the light enters you - Rumi' don't count the sorrows, you are and will be amazing poet as ever! Congratulations on your win. Cheers!!! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/7/2025 3:25:00 PM thriveni, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings ~

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/2/2025 1:40:00 PM You would be a poet in any other life Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/2/2025 4:30:00 PM Andrea, you are right as I could not image being anything else, blessings ~

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/2/2025 1:39:00 PM Constance. You chose a cool poetry form for my contest and as always, you wrote from your heart. Loved the simplicity and flow of your delightful dizain. Congrats . Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/2/2025 4:28:00 PM Andrea, thank you for the contest and my placement, ad for the compliment, commet and congrats, blessings ~

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/6/2025 11:39:00 AM Hello Constance, i do wonder who you could be in another world. I think those thought myself. i think I would be a cat lady. Owning some cats. Love & Friendship & Love, Darlene Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/7/2025 10:21:00 AM Hello Constance, I will run a cat rescues. I am not ready to create poetry yet. I do not have any poetry at hand to post yet. So I will create a poem then post it when i am ready. Love 7 Friendship /Darlene/ Constance La France Date: 2/6/2025 3:10:00 PM Darlene, thank you for the visit, I think that I would run a cat rescue, and still write poems ~

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 2/5/2025 10:16:00 AM Dear Constance, Oh how your words carry a wistful longing yet burn with resilience. The questions you pose linger, deep and reflective, but that fire within you shines through. No matter the life, your voice would still find its way to poetry. Beautiful! Winter Blessings, my Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/6/2025 3:12:00 PM Daniel, thank you for the lovely comment and compliment, yes not matter what I did in this other life I am sure my poetic voice would still be with me, blessings ~

John Read Date: 2/5/2025 1:59:00 AM Hi Constance I often think the same thing, having been through so much sorrow in my life,have a lovely day. xx Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/6/2025 3:14:00 PM John, its nice to think of another life and even though I have had a lot of sorrow and grief in mine, I would not change a things in my life because it has made me, me ~

CayCay Jennings Date: 2/4/2025 6:33:00 PM This is lovely and it is deep. I know we are all exactly who, what and where we are meant to be, but still I ponder as you lyrically did above ... CayCay Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/6/2025 3:15:00 PM CayCay, nice to hear from you, thank you for the compliment and comment, yes, we dream but we are who we are meant to be in the end ~

Deb M Date: 2/4/2025 2:28:00 PM Love this Constance! Made me feel a bit sad though as l know from your poems that life hasn't always been kind to you. Cuddles…Debx Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/6/2025 3:17:00 PM Deb, thank you for the comment and compliment, yes my life has been difficult for me but all that grief and sorrow has formed me into who I am, and I kinda like me ~