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In and out the lusty nil wedding bells

(Inspired by Marvin Goldfarb's great contest in which I won a trophy cup and wonderful poems by other English poets as noted below, 'LESSON IN LIFE' by BrittBrattTechy, 'Every child deserves better' by Poetryintheblood, and..'TODAY'S SOCIETY' By Gary. W. Hill.) My poem below then read the poems I copy pasted in my author notes. Instead of ' in and out the dusty bluebells ' my title is: In and out the lusty no weddin bells' If you are ruthlessly one of those who changes lovers like you do your clothes and if you do beget each time think of the hapless kids you leave behind rather than the silly selfish fun you have each time for you deprive them of either yourself or your ex-other half. Gosh, it took two to make a child so it takes two to make it glow and grow For nurturing them, both of you as couple need show A single mother is modernity's most pitiable unfortunate sight Modernisation to be blamed for this miserable plight. How many times will you jilt and ditch partners just for moments of nihilistic pleasure and excitement? But why let your innocent tiny tots suffer as if children were mere byproducts! And byproducts of what? I say, of flitting, fleeting lusts and desirous passions, when senses can't think of consequence or contraceptions, for damn it you can't know where and when you will be carried away... Then the resulting lil angels to be cast aside as some leftovers from past whirlwind romances.! All that merry-go-round of flirtation Marriage replaced by cohabitation Falling in and out of the cycle-like-love again and again for a newfound turtledove! No probability of any stability esp with the scenario of promiscuity while kids suffer from disability. Didn't the Creator expect all couples to stay together till 'death do 'em' apart So how dare any of His creations stick together merely till 'they get tired and bored? ? ? ? As if the heart were an everchanging love mart! (pls do read the copy pasted poems by others below to get a gist of what im reiterating above)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2025 6:05:00 AM

I agree, S. Zaynab, there is so much of this going on with young people today. Parents need to take responsibility for their children and teach the way they should go and hopefully they will follow their parents' teachings. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 7/19/2025 9:40:00 AM

Yeah so true, warm thanks for your thoughts adding nicely to this poem,

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/9/2025 2:54:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 7/19/2025 4:31:00 AM

Thanks for your comment, yeah bible is against promiscuity and fornication too.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/8/2025 10:54:00 AM

Hello S. Zaynab, My marrigage lasted for 10years. In the 4th year of my marriage my husband cheated on me. That was like a knife through my heart. I told him he did not know what true love was. Anyway he got sick then passed. I am over it now. I have moved on. marriage is between two people with the bond to be ture to one anther.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/8/2025 10:56:00 AM

S.Zaynab, i was faithful he was not. There were times i wondered if i did something wrong. then i realized it was him that cheated not me. Hugs. /Darlene/

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/7/2025 8:23:00 PM

The modern heart is divided into countless parts, apparently. Like the head's different personalities, schizophrenia reigns. Naught but pain.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 7/19/2025 4:32:00 AM

Thanks for your thoughts, I had been too busy to login until now.

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/7/2025 3:12:00 PM

Everthing we relate to in this existence, is a Sketch of more profound realitys we will encounter in the next life.' So this iz a filtering Of our qualitys, this existence we are living now And we should be more reverent, than sometimes we are.' Or are taught to be by media E t c.' The test is before us.' Can we persevere? Good piece here, S Zaynab.'

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 7/19/2025 4:30:00 AM

Thanks so much for your thoughts on this, i had been too busy to login until now.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/6/2025 4:50:00 PM

SZK, I haven't seen your work before, but a pleasure to be here and thank-you for your comment. You're making a valid point about responsibilities of parenthood. Having a sexual relationship is not a joke for sure. As products of evolution, I suppose the pleasure which helped our species survive can overwhelm the rational thought we should maintain to prevent bringing unwanted children into this world. Having two parents does certainly help...but what I think matters even more is having care that nurtures a child even if only from one parent. I think that's better than abusive care from one or both parents. I hope you have been "parented" with love. If not, I can certainly see where you are coming from. Your work has passion and makes me think deeply about parenthood. BTW, I'm married for 47 years with a wonderful wife and two wonderful adult children at this point. It's not an easy thing to do right. Anyone not raised properly will need time and healing to develop forgiveness.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 1/6/2025 9:22:00 PM

Yeah i have been parented with much love even if mom was hot twmpered. But dad was really cool tempered. Single parenthood makes it harder so really kids should be born in a marriage and yes the parents have to be caring not abusive, yet discipline and freedoms should be balanced with neither in extreme. Thanks soo much for a great comment.

Karen Croft

Date: 1/6/2025 1:18:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem! Today I enjoyed reading yours. Very valid points you have made. I have felt this early in my life, but I didn't run from one to another for love. I guess it was a way to leave one bad situation just to find myself in another. Have a great day!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 1/6/2025 9:17:00 PM

Yeah you so right, i see them skipping from one boyfriend to another but all give similar heartbreaks until finally they settle down coz they are middle aged and tired but still not that the guy is any better. Warm thanks for great comment.

Tom Woody

Date: 1/6/2025 10:31:00 AM

Nick Cannon needs to read this one lol. You make some valid points about morality

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 1/6/2025 9:15:00 PM

Yay hey i will have to look up Nick cannon then, thanks so much for cool comment,

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/6/2025 6:40:00 AM

cont/ poems by others:... She says she's " too busy for marriage" And with the way things stand, " she's fine" 5 years,5 kids,5 different dads No wonder she hasn't the time She actually seems quite oblivious To the disapproving stares It's the kids that I feel sorry for A real sad state of affairs The way she chooses to live her life Simply baffles me She symbolizes everything that is wrong With today's society.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/6/2025 6:36:00 AM

Cont/ .. poems by others: TODAY'S SOCIETY' By Gary. W. Hill.: First too young to be married Then simply hadn't the time As she continued to churn out kids Like some weird production line She doesn't see the point in marriage It's an institution out of date Quite happy with the way things are Though the situation is far from great Though she far from lives in poverty She seems to get by OK You see, she gets more money from the state Each time another kid is on the way...

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/6/2025 6:32:00 AM

Cont/..Now you must deal with it all alone His whereabouts are now unknown You can't party and no hanging out This baby is here, it's all life's about A lesson you learned the hard way Time for you to grow up right away This baby no accident not a mistake Just remember those steps to take ___No ring on a finger don't get in bed That is today's lesson enough said

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/6/2025 6:29:00 AM

Poems by others: Lesson In Life By Brittany McCarthy: These days morals have gotten lost Teens wanna get in bed at any cost Future dreams, that college degree ___Put on hold you are a mother to be You thought he loved you, guess not He found out now you're not so hot It's the next girl's turn to find it out The relationship was not about love Pregnancies are what's kept track of How many babies he brought to life Should've waited till you were a wife

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/6/2025 6:25:00 AM

Cont/from poems by others...You'll be too blind to see that you're captured in lies From thousand miles now, they won't hear your cries You'll have no one to talk to, the baby screaming all night long You won't know what to do, their screams will be your favourite song He got what he wanted, and now he's gone Stop repeating the very same mistakes, and start moving on!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/6/2025 6:19:00 AM

Cont/..from below, poem by others: Why does she have to go through so many heartbreaks? Can't she see that life is getting tougher? The kids don't even know their fathers Is this the life she wanted to live? Why did she even fall for those creatures? Probably this was her motive. Carriage before marriage is wrong, you see.. They will use you, impregnate you, and leave you be... They will act all innocent in front of your eyes They will whisper all sweet things to you from thousand miles ....

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/6/2025 6:15:00 AM

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM: Poems by others on same topic Author's notes: Out of wedlock By Evelyn. M. Epidemic Of-pain life You'll see her walking down the street ------Makeup covering her face Her kids have nothing to eat -----Oh she's such a disgrace! A new kid ever year------ The youngest is yet to talk -----They don't have clothes to wear They are all born out of wedlock. Why does she keep repeating the very same mistakes? -------Why allow her children to suffer? ....