In An Enchanted Forest

Hair tousled looks a mess
was worth it that soft caress. 
Maybe just a dream ... felt surreal,
my body  bending
as a  willow tree,  branches
were my arms wrapped  around me.

We walked with light steps
in our dream state.
You were a tree of apples
how I savoured you.
I enjoyed biting into
skin ripened by suns warmth

I was enchanted
by the overwhelming peace
coming from this vast forest
a forest of dreams,
a release from life's toils,
always there in my slumber.


Penned 15 November 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 11/19/2017 6:22:00 AM
This is a soft and enchanting write my friend! I felt a calm peace that came over me when I read this delightful poem this morning! I surely enjoyed this amazing poem, all directed towards my extravagant belief of wonderment! I really loved your feelings and emotions that sprawl throughout your enlightening piece, what a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/18/2017 10:10:00 PM
Delightfully enchanting poem. Wonderful, Seren.
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Date: 11/18/2017 7:42:00 PM
Excellent Seren...I'd like to be there
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Date: 11/18/2017 7:41:00 PM
Beautiful dream like poem Seren! :)
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