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In An Autumn Kiss

It’s in an Autumn kiss I feel again Nostalgic yearning for the yet-to-be. Awakened, I’m released from the mundane. No other kiss inspires so magically As fall’s! I breathe her colors in and sigh. . . . Unleashed, I soar with leaves, for it’s a thrill To taste the wind and dance into the sky. Unclad and glad, I swirl with clouds until Misgivings come to me. Then down I float. Naive as always, I’ve been led by this Kiss, for now a melancholy note Is drifting through a mist. Farewell to bliss. Soon winter will embrace me though I know Seduction comes less easily by snow. An Acrostic in Sonnet form, Written Aug. 26, 2012

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Date: 9/18/2018 2:57:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your superb win. Lovely piece :) xxx
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Date: 9/18/2018 1:25:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea, on your 1st place win!
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Date: 9/18/2018 11:22:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win, Andrea. A lovely acrostic.
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Date: 9/12/2018 10:18:00 AM
An "AcrostiSonnet" you devilish autumn imp. Nicely done Andrea,
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Date: 9/11/2018 8:36:00 AM
What a clever poem! Lovely enjambment creates a beautiful continuous flow. Congrats.
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Date: 10/29/2012 4:18:00 PM
Sijo for which contest?The one for which you wrote a Sijo?But for that contest any form is acceptable.
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Date: 9/25/2012 2:28:00 PM
Soup mail
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Date: 9/24/2012 5:20:00 PM
So beautiful Andrea.....congrats on a well deserved win! Hugs
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Date: 9/20/2012 1:04:00 PM
Oh Andrea, I think this is one of the most beautiful poems of yours that I've read! Faved! :) Tanya
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Date: 9/20/2012 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Francine's "Autumn Acrostic" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2012 5:31:00 AM
Great poem! I felt the feeling of fall as I read this!
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Date: 9/16/2012 5:00:00 PM
Wow,,,,this kiss is so long and flowing...complex yet it reads so simple!!!....Marvelous for u to win with this kissing poem!! hahah ....Congrats as u stand at the top of the podium...I shall shower u with roses and daffodils!! hugs, gwendolen
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Date: 9/16/2012 2:14:00 PM
Fantastic write, Andrea! I love the imagery you used. Congrats on a well deserved 1st place win! Thank you for all your encouraging and wonderful comments on my poems. Love, KIm
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Date: 9/16/2012 12:59:00 PM
Wonderful and excellent piece,Andrea...Great work..Well written,well deserving..Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...Ride on,friend...
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Date: 9/16/2012 11:15:00 AM
your words waltz across the page, andie... congrats on your well-deserved top win!..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/16/2012 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win, Andrea!!!
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Date: 9/16/2012 8:45:00 AM
Acrostic and a sonnet. Impressive. CAndrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/16/2012 3:41:00 AM
Congrats Andrea for the first place!!! Really deserves winning. LOve, Khalid
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Date: 9/16/2012 3:08:00 AM
2 wins! congratulations!!!
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Date: 9/16/2012 1:35:00 AM
Hooray! I loved this one Andrea and i am so happy to see it take top honors. I am just happy to get an HM in the company of these wonderful poems. A Big Congratulations!
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Date: 9/16/2012 12:40:00 AM
CONGRATS ANDREA ON A TERRIFIC FIRST PLACE WIN FOR A FABULOUS AUTUMN ACROSTIC LUV ..
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Date: 9/15/2012 11:26:00 PM
Hi Andrea, how are you?? stopping by to say hi and congratulate you with your awesome win,, good night...pd
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Date: 9/15/2012 10:48:00 PM
we have to stop meeting like this, congrats Andrea on your first place win in yet another of my contests, you know my tastes well
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Date: 9/6/2012 9:26:00 PM
Each autumn kiss so fresh and new, love your write, love debra
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Date: 8/31/2012 12:08:00 PM
another great poem from a great poet like you!!!..thanks for your comments on "Raindrops Falling" unluckily, I was late to submit it again (^_^)so forgetful... its okay better luck next time...
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