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In Absence of the Soothing Light of Moon

(Sonnet with rhyme on both ends of alternating lines) The starkness of my world now that he’s gone pervades in all I see and hear and feel, but darkness swallows all until the dawn invades. Then what I’ve lost is made more real! I yearn for Moon’s return - her tender light to keep me soothed, for sunshine is my bane. I burn with thoughts of him. I need, each night, to sleep away my longings and the pain. He left, and now he’s far away from me across the globe. Oh, how I love him so! Bereft am I, but he perhaps feels free! My loss means where he is tonight shall glow sweet Moon, caressing him - as once did I, and soon, I’ll face the glare from morning’s sky! For Nicola Byrne's Long Distance Love Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/27/2020 10:13:00 PM
Your talent really shines with this double rhyme structure. I like how you are comforted by the night's darkness and dread the glare of the sun that exposes the emptiness. Maybe you're part vampire? Well done, Andrea.
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Date: 10/24/2016 6:53:00 AM
As always Andrea, your works rock!!! Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 10/20/2016 8:56:00 AM
Such a beautiful elegant sonnet, Andrea - congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/19/2016 11:08:00 PM
I loved the intricate rhyme.... it's as difficult as long distance love is. Opposite worlds, opposite rhyme. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/27/2014 8:29:00 PM
Sounds like you got dumped Petal, never mind I know the feeling well lol. Ok I'll be serious, a beautiful, beautiful poem that deserves first place, congratulations. Take care, Richard
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Date: 2/27/2014 11:53:00 AM
congrats on your win my poetic friend, only one who has been burned by love's flames can write of sadness in words that are felt by the reader..
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Date: 2/27/2014 7:38:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win Andrea, I enjoyed reading this poem......Hugs.....Roger
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Date: 2/27/2014 4:09:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/26/2014 12:04:00 PM
Brilliantly written. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 2/26/2014 10:18:00 AM
congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 2/26/2014 9:36:00 AM
Deep sense of longing. Nicely put together. Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 2/26/2014 4:11:00 AM
Nice dear . I'll face the love from morning's sky ! Best wishes from India .
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Date: 2/25/2014 9:17:00 PM
Wonderful entry, Andrea. I love to read Iambic metered verse, and your's was inspiring. Christopher
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Date: 2/25/2014 8:50:00 PM
Very clever rhyming scheme. Congratulations Andrea. Love, joyce
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Date: 2/25/2014 7:42:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/25/2014 5:05:00 PM
Andrea what a lovely sonnet you've written and the double rhyme quite unique and very clever. I can see why it was given a first place win - Connie
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:31:00 PM
congradulations on winning first place in this contest. it was a very meaningful piece and as all good pieces have something to tell as this one did.
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations on winning with this write. I see it was number one in Giorgio's contest. Reading this piece was certainly a delight. It deserved to be ranked at the top of the best.
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Date: 2/25/2014 2:44:00 PM
Ah yes! I especially like the way you separated the verses here...Never seen it done that way...Small wonder why I NEVER get tired of reading sonnets by the Sonnet Queen...Congrats my friend - Tim
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Date: 2/25/2014 1:54:00 PM
A very romantic poem Andrea! Congratulations the big win!
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:13:00 AM
Andrea, , congratulations on your wonderful win - SKAT
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Date: 2/25/2014 3:11:00 AM
Congratulations to your well-deserved win friend Andrea :) ;) wish you all the best in life everyday. hugs from the land of smile (^______^)
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Date: 2/25/2014 3:04:00 AM
so lovely Andrea I love it fantastic pen (fav-ing) congrats on win hugs
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Date: 2/25/2014 2:39:00 AM
- Contest judged: 2/24/2014 - Impress me - V (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio A.V. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Pleased to read your poem, Andrea. - nice to join :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2014 11:42:00 PM
Congrats Andrea,no doubt a worthy lead,that is my Andrea,good day with love.
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