In Absence of the Soothing Light of Moon

(Sonnet with rhyme on both ends of alternating lines) The starkness of my world now that he’s gone pervades in all I see and hear and feel, but darkness swallows all until the dawn invades. Then what I’ve lost is made more real! I yearn for Moon’s return - her tender light to keep me soothed, for sunshine is my bane. I burn with thoughts of him. I need, each night, to sleep away my longings and the pain. He left, and now he’s far away from me across the globe. Oh, how I love him so! Bereft am I, but he perhaps feels free! My loss means where he is tonight shall glow sweet Moon, caressing him - as once did I, and soon, I’ll face the glare from morning’s sky! For Nicola Byrne's Long Distance Love Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Watt Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 10:13 PM
Your talent really shines with this double rhyme structure. I like how you are comforted by the night's darkness and dread the glare of the sun that exposes the emptiness. Maybe you're part vampire? Well done, Andrea.
Kimathi Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 6:53 AM
As always Andrea, your works rock!!! Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Krampe Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Such a beautiful elegant sonnet, Andrea - congrats on your win!
White Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 11:08 PM
I loved the intricate rhyme.... it's as difficult as long distance love is. Opposite worlds, opposite rhyme. Congratulations!
Seal Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 8:29 PM
Sounds like you got dumped Petal, never mind I know the feeling well lol. Ok I'll be serious, a beautiful, beautiful poem that deserves first place, congratulations. Take care, Richard
Parker Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 11:53 AM
congrats on your win my poetic friend, only one who has been burned by love's flames can write of sadness in words that are felt by the reader..
Horsch Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 7:38 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win Andrea, I enjoyed reading this poem......Hugs.....Roger
Kiser Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 4:09 AM
Congratulations!
Eastman Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 12:04 PM
Brilliantly written. Congratulations on the win.
May Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 10:18 AM
congrats on a great win Andrea
Ligon Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 9:36 AM
Deep sense of longing. Nicely put together. Congrats, Andrea!
Goswami Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 4:11 AM
Nice dear . I'll face the love from morning's sky ! Best wishes from India .
Britt Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Wonderful entry, Andrea. I love to read Iambic metered verse, and your's was inspiring. Christopher
Johnson Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 8:50 PM
Very clever rhyming scheme. Congratulations Andrea. Love, joyce
Guzzi Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 5:05 PM
Andrea what a lovely sonnet you've written and the double rhyme quite unique and very clever. I can see why it was given a first place win - Connie
Pettit Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 4:22 PM
Congratulations on winning with this write. I see it was number one in Giorgio's contest. Reading this piece was certainly a delight. It deserved to be ranked at the top of the best.
Ryerson Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 2:44 PM
Ah yes! I especially like the way you separated the verses here...Never seen it done that way...Small wonder why I NEVER get tired of reading sonnets by the Sonnet Queen...Congrats my friend - Tim
Barnett Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 1:54 PM
A very romantic poem Andrea! Congratulations the big win!
A  Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 4:13 AM
Andrea, , congratulations on your wonderful win - SKAT
Liwayway Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 3:11 AM
Congratulations to your well-deserved win friend Andrea :) ;) wish you all the best in life everyday. hugs from the land of smile (^______^)
Hamilton Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 3:04 AM
so lovely Andrea I love it fantastic pen (fav-ing) congrats on win hugs
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February 25, 2014 at 2:39 AM
- Contest judged: 2/24/2014 - Impress me - V (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio A.V. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Pleased to read your poem, Andrea. - nice to join :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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February 24, 2014 at 11:42 PM
Congrats Andrea,no doubt a worthy lead,that is my Andrea,good day with love.
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February 24, 2014 at 11:00 PM
Beautiful Andrea and congratulations on the win... Verlena
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