In A World Where I Do Not Exist

Near a distant sun
Under an uncontaminated crystalline sky
Exists a world without me

Where the viridescent grass ages unchallenged 
Wears wizened beards
And bows only to the wind

Where the waters crash when you thirst to surf
Smooths when you desire to paddle
And ripples towards shore when you’re heading home

Where zebras change their stripes daily 
From neon green to psychedelic purple 
Or any color in between 

Where the “H” on a building simply symbolizes “Help”
And is a communal gathering place
Where anyone can ask and receive assistance with anything 

Where government is synonymous with communication 
Leadership is synonymous with service 
And opponent is synonymous with respect 

But, this distant inhabitation,
Magnificent as it may be
Lacks Caleb, Adam, and Kelsi

Two sons and a daughter that have shone so bright
That they must have burned themselves into my pupils 
Since they are always in my sight

So, I turn from this distant scene
A dream without an imperfect me
Because,

A world full of wonders 
Will always fall short of wonderful 
Without the likes of Caleb, Adam, and Kelsi
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Date: 9/11/2024 9:28:00 AM
Wondrous penning, Robert. If this poem is for the contest, my very best wishes. Have a splendid evening. All the best. :)
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 9/11/2024 3:47:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 9/8/2024 2:04:00 PM
Easy to see why this one placed so highly Robert, I love that line how your children burned themselves into your pupils, perhaps as your pupils as well, great choice of language here (psychedelic colours) also gives another dimension, congratulations, cheers David
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 9/9/2024 8:30:00 AM
Thanks, David!
Date: 9/7/2024 7:52:00 AM
I think we would all find it difficult to imagine a world without out loved ones... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 9/8/2024 10:29:00 AM
Thank you! Great contest to inspire creativity!
Date: 8/31/2024 1:51:00 PM
Ahh such a sweet one keeping your family uppermost in your mind
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 8/31/2024 3:32:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 8/28/2024 5:26:00 AM
Brilliant and very descriptive too how you’ve expressed here dear robert, you have a way with words: i really love especially the lines “ Where zebras change their stripes daily From neon green to psychedelic purple Or any color in between” how imaginative and artistic makes on dream away and think of all the possibilities youv expressed in such deep metaphors! The ending is so heartfelt! Felt this poem woven in eloquence! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 8/28/2024 8:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Empress!!
Date: 8/28/2024 12:02:00 AM
This is very touching and deep, Robert so heart felt
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 8/28/2024 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Mystic Rose!
Date: 8/27/2024 5:46:00 PM
Aww so sweet! Love the changing colors of the zebras’ stripes!
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 8/28/2024 8:36:00 AM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 8/27/2024 5:32:00 PM
Good luck. The competition is thick on this one. Thanks for sharing.
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 8/28/2024 8:39:00 AM
Thank you! I agree, this subject has inspired many great entries from what I’ve seen!
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