In a World of Fantasy

IN A WORLD OF FANTASY

Walking alone in the wilderness,
I felt strange when I saw thick bushes,
Out of curiosity, I still go on my journey,
And discovered a secret passage along the way.

There’s a narrow stairs as I went down,
Looking side by side with a frown,
What lies beneath on this unknown place?
I heard the splashing of water that makes me dazed.

In front of me was a real paradise from nowhere,
Flying fairies with colorful wings are everywhere,
A spectacular garden, a nymph, and a magic unicorn I see,
Plants and trees sparkling like diamonds around me.

I am in a world of fantasy,
Mesmerized with these great beauty,
Soft winds caressed my whole body,
A joyful heart makes me so sleepy….

I woke up by the sound of birds and the heat of the sun,
I looked around and in a blink everything was gone,
Maybe it’s not true anyway, but in my palm was a diamond leaf..



July 7, 2013
For Shadow Hamilton "Fantasy" Contest
9th Place Winner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/4/2013 2:55:00 AM
Nicely conceived Maria.A well deserved win on this one.
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Date: 7/10/2013 6:47:00 AM
I adore your fantasy...uplifting with brilliant imagery... "in my palm was a diamond leaf"...my kind of fantasy :)
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Date: 7/9/2013 9:40:00 AM
Maria congratulations on this delightful poem. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/9/2013 5:11:00 AM
Excellent. Well written poem Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 7/8/2013 8:27:00 PM
Proof enough. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/8/2013 5:39:00 AM
hi Maria most enjoyable poem good imagery congrats on your win ty for entering Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/7/2013 10:19:00 AM
An excellent poem which I extremely enjoy reading tonight my dear friend, Maria! I love it sooo much! I'm so glad that I've clicked your avatar. You did it very well! Kudos! thank you so much for sharing my dearest friend! Have a good night! May God bless you always! love lots and big big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 7/7/2013 8:41:00 AM
very cute ending. That would be so neat to awaken from such a fantastical dream and to have the leaf still in your hand!
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