In a Whispered Voice

I looked out in a forest
     and the constellation Taurus,  
searching for some sign of He
     who made this world and you and me.  

I searched the fields that grew the grain 
     and peered inside a drop of rain,
trying to find the illusive Mind 
     that made the universe, and time.  

I searched high hills and mountain peaks
     and dug down low to hear earth speak,
about everything I was looking for
     but nothing opened wide the door.

Then I looked inside a flower petal
     and atoms flying 'round in metals,
and took to reading ancient history
     but only found more misery and mystery.   

Then I swam in waters deep
     where oceans end and sailors' sleep,
then up again to sky and wind
     finding no answers, there again. 

I searched the sunshine and the shade
     and every blade of grass He made,
and all the birds that I like best
     but nothing quenched my futile quest. 

Until I closed my eyes one night 
     and prayed to Him to give me sight,
to see his face and lift me up
     to give me strength and fill my cup.

With all the faith as a child I had 
     but lost along life’s winding path,
until found again one prayer-filled morn
     in a whispered voice, I was reborn.

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Date: 8/13/2022 8:59:00 AM
Amazing what prayer can do for the soul. Thank you for sharing this wonderful Faith filled poem, it truly is uplifting. Have a blessed day dear poet
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Terrell Martin
Date: 8/13/2022 12:26:00 PM
Dear Mystic Rose, if I didn't mention it earlier my mother's name was Rose, and she was as sweet and kind as you are. I'm overjoyed that you stopped by to visit, read and comment so positively on "In a Whispered Voice." So glad you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed penning it. I owe you one so expect a visit soon. Until then, Write On, Terry
Date: 8/11/2022 8:04:00 PM
the poetry gives so much hope to ever reads it, one amazing journey, Terrell.
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Date: 8/13/2022 12:18:00 PM
Harry, I can't thank you enough for stopping by, reading and leaving your thoughts concerning this poem. I'm glad we could connect and look forward to future connections with you as well. I'll visit your page shortly. Until then, Write On, Terry
Date: 8/10/2022 11:25:00 AM
wow, this would be a life-altering experience, one which I personally have never had. I really like the imagery in your poem.
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Date: 8/13/2022 12:15:00 PM
Hi Andrea. Thank you for your thoughts on the matter and to be perfectly honest, it's just a poem and not a complete description of my conversion. I've been a Christian for about as long as I remember but have certainly stumbled along the way as everybody does. Still, I've been feeling closer to "Him" lately through reading, studying and writing (both poetry and in my journal) and this poem was an easy expression of my recent thoughts & feelings. Thanks again, Terry
Date: 8/10/2022 8:30:00 AM
Terry, If we have faith in Him, we have no need to search, for He lives inside our hearts, and He is always available to us. I truly enjoyed reading your poem. Your poetry flows with the cadence of a metronome.
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Date: 8/13/2022 12:07:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comments as usual, Jenna. Your visits and thoughts are always music to ears. And I completely agree with your assessment that "He lives inside our hearts, and He is always available to us." Thanks again & I'll visit soon. Cheerios, Terry
Date: 8/10/2022 6:15:00 AM
Great ending to your search. Finally coming to terms with the real reason for our existence is in a relationship with the One Who made us. I enjoyed reading your lines this morning. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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Date: 8/10/2022 6:21:00 AM
Thank you, Sara. My visit to your page was no less uplifting as well. Have a beautiful day reading and writing! All the best, Terry
Date: 8/9/2022 7:39:00 PM
Terry I am so happy you came back to him. Love your poetry and the ending was the icing on the cake. Well done my friend. The Prodigal Son this reminds me how he left and came back to his father and god who is always knowcking at your door. god bless you Terry, and thank you for sharing.
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Date: 8/10/2022 5:46:00 AM
Thank you, Michael. I always appreciate your unique insight. Write on, Terry
Date: 8/9/2022 6:09:00 PM
Dear Terrell, such an exquisite quest! Your lush rhythmic musings are filled with beautiful emotions and amazing imagery; “I peered inside a drop of rain” - simply stunning.. and “dug down low to hear earth speak” - wow! But every verse is inspiring in this wonderful poem.. and, such a great line for a grand finale as well! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/10/2022 5:51:00 AM
Hi Susan, I'm so pleased that you found the imagery as moving as I did while writing it. Occasionally we find unexpected inspiration, the origin of which never ceases to amaze me. Thank you for reading and sharing your high praised yet undeserved accolades. Warmest regards, Terry
Date: 8/9/2022 4:57:00 PM
What majestic pragmatic reflective philosophical share, praiseworthy spontaneous contemplative flow ... Silpika
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Date: 8/9/2022 5:10:00 PM
Thank you, Silpika! But I find your extraordinarily complimentary comment by far more poetically "majestic" than anything I've written here. But again, "thank you" is never enough to express my sincere gratitude for your time and interest. Hope to visit you soon. Bountiful blessings, Terry
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