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In a Pier of Desire

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As moonlight gleams upon your tanning skin while drops of crystal form upon that brow-- tufts of hair stroked by ambrosial wind your eyes begin to dance, a joyous play when evening mist unfurls our rendezvous, as light in tones of cerise starts to flame: With arms interlaced against dusk's marquee these open lips are humming notes away in this pier, furnace of hours' rhapsody kindles our passion through glaze of desire , that tides are swaying madly back and forth, as shadows wrap a cloak of fire around... O let evenfall remain for awhile till darkness hides our secret love affair. For Joseph May's Picture This Contest Image 3 Written 3/25/2018

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Date: 4/11/2018 9:40:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, nette. Well done.
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Date: 4/3/2018 3:07:00 AM
Nette, finely penned, well defined, romantically laden with passion, lined. :) Congrats! ~ Artsie
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Date: 4/1/2018 10:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your interpretation of the pic.
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:25:00 PM
I was mesmerized by this loving poem, especially the the first line. My Darling wife is perpetually tanned with her olive skin. Congratulations , nette!
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Date: 4/1/2018 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Nette :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 9:03:00 AM
Back with congrats nette!
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:32:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Nette :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:14:00 AM
This is GORGEOUS! Sooo romantic! Congratulations on your win Nette :) xomo!
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:26:00 AM
"When evening mist unfurls our rendezvous" A lovely write Nette...Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/26/2018 6:12:00 AM
Such a romantic ecstasy, lovely lines as always Nette..
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Date: 3/25/2018 4:37:00 PM
Sultry, sweet flow of words highlighting passion's rapture. I enjoyed the last lines; didn't see that secret coming. Marvelously rendered!
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Date: 3/24/2018 10:16:00 PM
A romantic escapade so deliciously delivered Nette. Absolutely beautiful and enjoyed. Best wishes for a win!
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Date: 3/24/2018 8:16:00 PM
you captured the picture and its romance as though you were on its boardwalk...good luck
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Date: 3/24/2018 6:07:00 PM
You captured that image perfectly in your words..a romantic rendering in precious tones..well done, nette..best for a win.
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Date: 3/24/2018 3:49:00 PM
Beautifully written Nette. You are such a talented poet, every word of this work is romantic
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