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In a Pier of Desire

As moonlight gleams upon your tanning skin while drops of crystal form upon that brow-- tufts of hair stroked by ambrosial wind your eyes begin to dance, a joyous play when evening mist unfurls our rendezvous, as light in tones of cerise starts to flame: With arms interlaced against dusk's marquee these open lips are humming notes away in this pier, furnace of hours' rhapsody kindles our passion through glaze of desire , that tides are swaying madly back and forth, as shadows wrap a cloak of fire around... O let evenfall remain for awhile till darkness hides our secret love affair. For Joseph May's Picture This Contest Image 3 Written 3/25/2018
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Gauthier Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 9:40 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, nette. Well done.
Donnelly Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 3:07 AM
Nette, finely penned, well defined, romantically laden with passion, lined. :) Congrats! ~ Artsie
Gentry Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:34 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your interpretation of the pic.
Sergi Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 2:25 PM
I was mesmerized by this loving poem, especially the the first line. My Darling wife is perpetually tanned with her olive skin. Congratulations , nette!
Sands Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations for your win Nette :)
Pandit Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 9:03 AM
Back with congrats nette!
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 8:32 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Nette :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 8:14 AM
This is GORGEOUS! Sooo romantic! Congratulations on your win Nette :) xomo!
May Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:26 AM
"When evening mist unfurls our rendezvous" A lovely write Nette...Congrats on your win
One Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 6:12 AM
Such a romantic ecstasy, lovely lines as always Nette..
Casto Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Sultry, sweet flow of words highlighting passion's rapture. I enjoyed the last lines; didn't see that secret coming. Marvelously rendered!
Ashley Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 10:16 PM
A romantic escapade so deliciously delivered Nette. Absolutely beautiful and enjoyed. Best wishes for a win!
Parker Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 8:16 PM
you captured the picture and its romance as though you were on its boardwalk...good luck
Pandit Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 6:07 PM
You captured that image perfectly in your words..a romantic rendering in precious tones..well done, nette..best for a win.
Green Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Beautifully written Nette. You are such a talented poet, every word of this work is romantic
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