In a Perfect World - For Contest

In a Perfect World


In a perfect world we’d need no God
horses hooves would ne’er be shod
nor would the instinct to fight or flee
determine how you’d relate to me.

Each cue ball break would sink your balls
there’d be no whispering in the halls
if every word uttered is true
I wonder what they’d say ‘bout you.

When every woman is a perfect ten
what would make men look again
or cause the woman to entertain
hot fleeting glances all the same.

And if perchance perfection’s choices
damn us all with perfect voices
perfect volume, perfect tone
a perfect, numbing, endless, drone.

Sunrise, sunset, perfect sameness
perfection’s sinners, perfect, blameless
nothing to venture, nothing to gain
‘cuz everything turns out the same.

Everybody shares the wealth
dogs pick up after themselves
hats in boomeranged retreat
returned, and landed, at our feet.

Perfection is its own reward
no need for heaven or its God
angels, idle, listless, dopey
wings - participation trophy.



2/8/2016

submitted to – In a Perfect World – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Catie Lindsey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 7:23 AM
Perfection is it's own reward... Bravo!.. Congrats on a great win my friend.. A world I would love to live in.. Hugs... Arlene
A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 2:35 AM
thank you for the reply to my comment
Gupta Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 9:31 AM
Really a perfect world poem.......
Lawless Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Thanks for stopping by to comment
A. Sharma Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 1:06 AM
Awesome poetry n win John.. big congrats!
Lawless Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma for your continuing support
A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:19 PM
John, Congrats on your "Perfect World WIN." LINDA
Lawless Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Thanks Linda
Grammatico Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 9:16 PM
Congrats on the win, John. Each stanza was a gem.
Lawless Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Thanks Steve, appreciate the comment.
Ebbs Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 9:13 PM
Well done John, congrats on your win!
Lawless Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Thanks Edward
Jerden Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 8:08 PM
This one is my favorite. Utopia, a word meaning "no place", but not in a good way, usually. Congratulations!
Lawless Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Thanks for stopping by Roy, always nice to hear from you
Lane Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 5:48 PM
Well done rhyming verses for the contest, John. Congratulations.
Lawless Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Lin, there are those who believe that in a perfect "poetic" world all poem would rhyme
Gentry Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed reading this.
Lawless Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Thanks for stopping to read and comment.
Scars Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 5:46 PM
John, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
Lawless Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Thanks Laura
Turner Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 1:32 PM
This is an excellent write, John. You are 100% correct. Love it.
Lawless Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Thanks Daniel for stopping by to read and comment.
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