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In a Perfect World

In a perfect world, I think we would get to be the age we looked and felt our best. I’d be in my 40’s, and I would have stopped aging. Calories would not mean a thing. Perfect bodies need no rules of when, where, how or what to eat. If I wanted a Cinnabon, I’d have it, and then I‘d have one more. Haagen-Dazs would inhabit my freezer. Boxes of Lindor chocolates would adorn my pantry shelves. Doritos and cans of nacho cheese dip would be there as well. I’d have a man who pampered me. On weekends we’d go dancing. In summer we’d be on jet skis, partying with friends, and lazing about. Wait! It would be a perfect world. All year long would be like summer then. Probably I’d be on an island. Yes, in a beautiful home on a beautiful island. In a perfect world, people do what people want to do. Me, I‘d not be working! Robot people would clean my house. And since I would be rich, there would be no poverty in a perfect world. I mean, I would not want the guilty conscience of being rich while others would be poor. Everyone would have to be pretty much the same as me! I suppose the folks who love to work would still be working. Folks like me would be writing poetry. But wait! What would I have to write about? There would be no sacrifice, no pain. Where would be the heart in poetry? No injustices to speak out against either if all were free and living in ease. If we stayed young and didn’t age, nostalgic poetry would be a thing of the past. If everything were beautiful, could we appreciate the many things we had? We wouldn’t know how good we had it, If we had no misery to ever write about. On further thought, I have come to this conclusion. In a perfect world, there could be no real poetry - only pretty little posies in an already pretty world. What then, I ask, would be my purpose? Written Feb. 14, 2016. Note to Catie: Not sure if this is exactly free verse. In a short time, this was all that could come to me, but I enjoyed reflecting on the topic!

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Date: 4/15/2018 1:48:00 PM
What a lovely perfect world, Andrea !
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Date: 4/23/2016 1:35:00 PM
Very clever. In a perfect world we would, most likely, dissolve into extinction and obscurity....
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Date: 2/18/2016 7:01:00 PM
fascinaing write. how can one have pleasure without pain or bueaty without something ugly. everything is relative i suppose. love this write
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/18/2016 7:20:00 PM
glad YOU liked it!! It's so hard for me to write true free verse!
Date: 2/17/2016 10:52:00 PM
You sometimes wish for things which you are better off without as you show in this stimulating ode. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/16/2016 5:12:00 PM
Your world is perfect sure, fragrance comes from your beautiful words my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Wish you 7. Loved always,bl
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:13:00 PM
I believe in a perfect world there would be boredom causing unrest and then it would no longer be perfect. I guess what I am saying is in a perfect world we would need a few challenges to keep things interesting. I enjoyed your perfect world, but you sure are right about needing a little pain for poetry. G L in the contest Andrea!
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Date: 2/15/2016 5:36:00 PM
Like a moth to a flame you seduce us with the beauty of you words and we fall prey to their magic spell, and then the clock strikes 12 and the shadows return us to reality. Emile.
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Date: 2/15/2016 12:39:00 PM
interesting thought process Andrea...seems there must always be a yin and yang
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Date: 2/15/2016 11:04:00 AM
I like your take on the contest Andrea!
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Date: 2/15/2016 8:06:00 AM
I enjoyed walking down this poetic thought road with you. Love would still be love! and so we could write about that. Interesting
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Date: 2/15/2016 4:21:00 AM
so right, andie...if things were perfect, what else is there to work on?... lovely thoughts!..huggs
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Date: 2/15/2016 1:11:00 AM
Beauty is about contrast, and if everything around us was would be perfect, we would no longer recognize it. I believe part of what a poet does is to cast light upon the darkness ... you are right to question what purpose would be if everything was already illuminated. Great poem!
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Date: 2/15/2016 12:47:00 AM
I like how you went about this one, Andrea. We wouldn't be human beings in a perfect world as we are not perfect. I'm trying to do free verse so I entered it too. Good luck. Your personality shines through your writing. :)
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Date: 2/14/2016 10:41:00 PM
I loved this!!
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Date: 2/14/2016 5:03:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... a fine poem indeed Andrea with plenty to think about and what is not needed in a world of perfection - Lindsay
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Date: 2/14/2016 4:48:00 PM
Loved your ending in this lovely poem, Andrea. I know nothing of perfection so this contest is not for me.
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Date: 2/14/2016 4:47:00 PM
I love your perfect world, I could eat and eat, drink and drink, and still be size 10, xxxxx
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Date: 2/14/2016 4:16:00 PM
Since perfection looks different to everybody, in reality there could never be perfection. I chose to skip this topic. You have done well. Good luck, Andrea:)
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Date: 2/14/2016 2:46:00 PM
You hit the nail on the head!!! I really enjoyed this Andrea. Elaine
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Date: 2/14/2016 2:29:00 PM
No poetry? How would we have known you then? What perfect world would it be, with you in your forties and skinny? No, thank you, dear Andrea! Hahaha! Wonderful writing with profound overtones! Happy Valentine's dear friend! A seven!
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Date: 2/14/2016 1:13:00 PM
If there was no poetry then it would be far from a perfect world. It reads like free verse to me Andrea.
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