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In a Perfect World

A world where no one needs to cry, No need to ever ask God why; No hate or war of any kind, My perfect world has peace of mind. Oh, every flower would grow bright, And nature would be a sweet sight; There would be love for all to find, My perfect world has peace of mind. This life's journey would have no thorns, Never a sad mother, who mourns; All the living would be twined, My perfect world has peace of mind. No one would ever have to work, And no rules would ever lurk; To jealousy all would be blind, My perfect world has peace of mind. A new world of no starvation, Gone would be evil temptation; No shadows around us would wind, My perfect world has peace of mind. _____________________ February 10, 2015 Poetry/Rhyme/In A Perfect World Copyright Protected, ID 15-755-391-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 2/13/2016 1:52:00 PM
Real magical world Constance, you pen this extremely well , indeed a real magical world that would be!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/13/2016 4:38:00 PM
Gordon, oh if only we could exist in my perfect world, thanks for visiting, I like that word magical !
Date: 2/13/2016 8:33:00 AM
that's a wonderful world there, excellent write BW, as always...best of luck in the contest
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Date: 2/13/2016 4:39:00 PM
Sage, thanks so much for the excellent, well apparently this is not what the sponsor wants, I have to write outside the box for the contst, but I love my perfect world ...
Date: 2/11/2016 12:19:00 PM
Enjoyed your kyrielle, Constance about a paradise. Beautiful expression!
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Date: 2/11/2016 12:33:00 PM
Thomas, thanks for visiting my poem and for the beautiful. ..
Date: 2/11/2016 11:59:00 AM
- A beautiful world - a paradise, B.W. :) #7 - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/11/2016 12:35:00 PM
Anne Lise, thanks for the visit, the 7, and the beautiful. . .
Date: 2/11/2016 9:45:00 AM
Very well written poem, BW. Love the flow and the rhyme is beautiful. Great write! Oh, beautiful content as well.
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Date: 2/11/2016 9:47:00 AM
James, thanks for the compliment on my writing and for the beautiful and the great !!
Date: 2/10/2016 10:32:00 PM
This is the one I like the most of yours. Good job.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/11/2016 9:19:00 AM
Mack, where have you been, thanks for that compliment, I worked hard on this one and appreciate your visit !
Date: 2/10/2016 8:53:00 PM
Constance, this art you penned is sooo beautiful :), jill
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Constance La France
Date: 2/11/2016 9:20:00 AM
Jill, thank you so much for visiting my poem and for the compliment and the beautiful, I am grateful !
Date: 2/10/2016 4:44:00 PM
Another lovely sentiment as I'm sure we could all envision the perfectness of no hate, greed, hunger or any other social plague or vice. You have a beautiful heart. Delicious poem.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/10/2016 8:18:00 PM
Daniel, thanks for visiting my poem and for that lovely comment, appreciate a lot !

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