Constance La France Poet Rhyme

In a Perfect World

A world where no one needs to cry,
No need to ever ask God why;
No hate or war of any kind,
My perfect world has peace of mind.

Oh, every flower would grow bright,
And nature would be a sweet sight;
There would be love for all to find,
My perfect world has peace of mind.

This life's journey would have no thorns,
Never a sad mother, who mourns;
All the living would be twined,
My perfect world has peace of mind.

No one would ever have to work,
And no rules would ever lurk;
To jealousy all would be blind,
My perfect world has peace of mind.

A new world of no starvation,
Gone would be evil temptation;
No shadows around us would wind,
My perfect world has peace of mind.

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February 10, 2015

Poetry/Rhyme/In A Perfect World
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Gordon Mcconnell February 13, 2016 at 1:52 PM Real magical world Constance, you pen this extremely well , indeed a real magical world that would be! Constance La France February 13, 2016 at 4:38 PM Gordon, oh if only we could exist in my perfect world, thanks for visiting, I like that word magical !

White Sage February 13, 2016 at 8:33 AM that's a wonderful world there, excellent write BW, as always...best of luck in the contest Constance La France February 13, 2016 at 4:39 PM Sage, thanks so much for the excellent, well apparently this is not what the sponsor wants, I have to write outside the box for the contst, but I love my perfect world ...

Thomas Martin February 11, 2016 at 12:19 PM Enjoyed your kyrielle, Constance about a paradise. Beautiful expression! Constance La France February 11, 2016 at 12:33 PM Thomas, thanks for visiting my poem and for the beautiful. ..

Anne-Lise Andresen February 11, 2016 at 11:59 AM - A beautiful world - a paradise, B.W. :) #7 - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Constance La France February 11, 2016 at 12:35 PM Anne Lise, thanks for the visit, the 7, and the beautiful. . .

James Inman February 11, 2016 at 9:45 AM Very well written poem, BW. Love the flow and the rhyme is beautiful. Great write! Oh, beautiful content as well. Constance La France February 11, 2016 at 9:47 AM James, thanks for the compliment on my writing and for the beautiful and the great !!

Mack Toler February 10, 2016 at 10:32 PM This is the one I like the most of yours. Good job. Constance La France February 11, 2016 at 9:19 AM Mack, where have you been, thanks for that compliment, I worked hard on this one and appreciate your visit !

Jill Spagnola February 10, 2016 at 8:53 PM Constance, this art you penned is sooo beautiful :), jill Constance La France February 11, 2016 at 9:20 AM Jill, thank you so much for visiting my poem and for the compliment and the beautiful, I am grateful !

Daniel Turner February 10, 2016 at 4:44 PM Another lovely sentiment as I'm sure we could all envision the perfectness of no hate, greed, hunger or any other social plague or vice. You have a beautiful heart. Delicious poem. Constance La France February 10, 2016 at 8:18 PM Daniel, thanks for visiting my poem and for that lovely comment, appreciate a lot !