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If we lived in a perfect world, love would naturally abound. And in this utopic dreamworld, there would be no hurt to be found. Peace and brotherhood would nourish hope and idealistic dreams. And Nature's critters would flourish, in our oceans, rivers, and streams. From rare orchids to edelweiss, flowers would encircle Earth's girth. And we'd all live in paradise; a virtual heaven on Earth. All diseases would disappear, and no one would die of hunger. And only crying happy tears, even the old would feel younger. But alas, it isn't that way, disease and cruelty persist. And starvation is here to stay, for warfare and famine exist. (Quatrain) 2/9/2016

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Date: 5/26/2018 7:30:00 PM
I vote for your ideal vision, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/12/2016 5:37:00 PM
Hello Emile ... once again an excellently written poem from you. Perfection almost seems like a myth - Lindsay
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Date: 2/13/2016 11:57:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay, I appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.
Date: 2/9/2016 5:16:00 PM
Excellent pen Emile! Beautifully painted picture in this piece.A 7! Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D.
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Date: 2/10/2016 9:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Dorian, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/9/2016 10:08:00 AM
Nice rhyming...should do well in the contest. BG
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Date: 2/9/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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