Emile Pinet Poet Quatrain

In a Perfect World

If the world were a perfect world,
Love would naturally abound.
And in this utopic dreamworld,
there would be no pain to be found.

Peace and brotherhood would nourish
hope and idealistic dreams.
And Nature's bounty would flourish,
in Her oceans, rivers, and streams.

From rare orchids to Edelweiss,
flowers would encircle Earth's girth.
And we'd all live in paradise;
a virtual heaven on Earth.

All diseases would disappear
nobody would die of hunger.
And we'd only cry happy tears,
while the old would feel much younger.

But alas, the world isn't perfect:
Hunger and poverty exist!
And diseases kill, and inflict
pain, while wars and famine persist.

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Line Gauthier May 26, 2018 at 7:30 PM I vote for your ideal vision, Emile. Emile Pinet May 27, 2018 at 7:59 AM Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Lindsay Laurie February 12, 2016 at 5:37 PM Hello Emile ... once again an excellently written poem from you. Perfection almost seems like a myth - Lindsay Emile Pinet February 13, 2016 at 11:57 AM Thanks Lindsay, I appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.

Dorian Petersen Potter February 9, 2016 at 5:16 PM Excellent pen Emile! Beautifully painted picture in this piece.A 7! Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D. Emile Pinet February 10, 2016 at 9:40 AM Thanks so much Dorian, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

Barbara Gorelick February 9, 2016 at 10:08 AM Nice rhyming...should do well in the contest. BG Emile Pinet February 9, 2016 at 10:24 AM Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your support. Emile.