In a Parallel Universe

In a parallel universe
Is there another me? 
Somewhere in a parallel universe
Quite near, yet very far
In a magical world
Where I have long white wings
I wave them upon mighty Oceans
Against the ferocious storms
Rest them on crowded offshoots of dark jungles
And return back at night to the den
That lies up in mountains ___ above the clouds... 

In yet another universe near by
Is there a different me__? 
Trapped inside a cage
Wings atrophied__
The art of flying forgotten__
Even the desire __ to take a flight __is dead
Just walls __
And walks__ In a close loop... 

Or is it just me? 
One and only __ in the unlimited multiverses

But these feelings in my beating heart__
Something in my mind___ tells me
They exist... 
Are they, like me, thinking about me__ right now? 

What if one of them open a portal 
And enter my world___
How would we feel? 
Would we like each others’ life style? 
Or is it, “grass is always greener on the other side”

But I wish her to be the one with mighty feathers
Would Swipe my life with her __ for a day or two
To feel my long dark hair
Floating on air waves
As I glide and soar high & high
Above the world
In a sweel parallel universe 

(10th July 2021)
Paghunda Zahid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rigoler Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 12:37 PM
Parallel worlds may be possible, but knowing there is another me somewhere is unsettling. / Maurice
Zahid Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 1:07 PM
Hi Maurice, I hope you're good. Well, yeah may be.. But if there is a mirror universe or universes, the there is a mirror me. Isn't it interesting
Delaney Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 2:56 AM
Hi Paghunda: Your imagination can take you anywhere. My friend told me about a book that explores this subject “A Darker Shade of Magic.” by VE Schwab.
Zahid Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 1:07 PM
Cool
Maverick Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 11:25 AM
Mountains above clouds..' maybe gas clouds Or meteor blankets.? I suppose there can be Many cloud types, I don't believe any being can Open any separate reality, apart from God.' I Put this from experience of myself and others Who I believe to be true witnesses of such Events.' Enjoyed your words and thoughts Pagunda..'
Zahid Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 1:08 PM
Thanks Joe
May Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 7:14 AM
I enjoyed this enchanting write ..
Zahid Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 1:08 PM
I am glad you did
Ashley Avatar
July 25, 2021 at 8:37 AM
Dearest Paghunda, you vivid, vibrant and profound pen spills with a potent magical potion that brings me to the essence of your impassioned poetic realm centered "in the unlimited multiverses". I rise and fall on the heartbeat and breath of your striking and thought-provoking imagery. Spectacular musings, my wonderful friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Zahid Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Thank you for the kind comment Susan.. It is a delight to read your comments.. Cheers
Horsman Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 7:19 PM
A world in which to escape to in times of trouble and conflict. Love your journey here, Paghunda.
Zahid Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 12:56 PM
Thanks Harry
Zahid Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Thanks Harry
Lamoureux Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 7:00 AM
I sometimes wonder if we have a glimpse of the parallel world when we look in a mirror. I enjoyed reading your contemplations. Well done.
Zahid Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 10:38 AM
What if these mirrors are actually portals to the other worlds!!
Dietrich Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 1:58 PM
oh I think about this too. I think it is actually possible. Love this. A fave.
Zahid Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 10:38 AM
So nice of you Andrea
Khan Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Also one of my favourite areas of writing and reading as well.Beautiful imagination,creation and imagery as well.keep it up
Zahid Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Thanks Aamir
Wolf Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 8:37 PM
Ah, this is wonderful poetry, Paghunda. I really enjoy your speculative musing. Such things I have not thought of for decades. Thanks for the reawakening! A FAVE for me! :) gw
Zahid Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Aww I am glad that it triggered your imaginations... Thank you!
Proxenos Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 12:14 PM
Your sweet parallel universe - make me think, what if the other opens a portal and enters my world, would we know who is who? Wonderful poetry, love your imagination! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. P.S. My Planet of Venus poem has as yet not been marked, the Sponsor has not marked the contest thus far.
Zahid Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Thanks Jenn... Well they say the difference can be as small as a difference of a mole or as large as a difference of gender... So can't say anything if we will know who is who or not.. Lol
Callus Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 3:37 AM
The concept you project in this creative poem gives me food for thought, Paghunda! For sure it sets my imagination in motion, wondering about "ifs". Maybe one day more things will be revealed to us.... Best regards // paul
Zahid Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 1:36 PM
Yes, indeed... Thank you
Buehler Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 9:01 PM
The idea of parallel universes is a fascinating idea to me. Your poem is intriguing and excellently written.
Zahid Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 1:36 PM
Thanks Evelyn
Alex Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 8:30 PM
The parallel universe, indeed, is a beautiful concept. Wonderfully done.
Zahid Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 1:36 PM
Yupp
Debole Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 1:49 PM
Hi Paghunda, Unique concept for a poem! Wouldn't it be so interesting if we did have counterparts in different universes and we could meet them? Supposedly, we all have someone who is physically identical to us in this world. - Take care and stay safe in all that you do, Gail
Zahid Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 1:37 PM
Yeah, it is such an interesting concept
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