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In a Parallel Universe

In a parallel universe Is there another me? Somewhere in a parallel universe Quite near, yet very far In a magical world Where I have long white wings I wave them upon mighty Oceans Against the ferocious storms Rest them on crowded offshoots of dark jungles And return back at night to the den That lies up in mountains ___ above the clouds... In yet another universe near by Is there a different me__? Trapped inside a cage Wings atrophied__ The art of flying forgotten__ Even the desire __ to take a flight __is dead Just walls __ And walks__ In a close loop... Or is it just me? One and only __ in the unlimited multiverses But these feelings in my beating heart__ Something in my mind___ tells me They exist... Are they, like me, thinking about me__ right now? What if one of them open a portal And enter my world___ How would we feel? Would we like each others’ life style? Or is it, “grass is always greener on the other side” But I wish her to be the one with mighty feathers Would Swipe my life with her __ for a day or two To feel my long dark hair Floating on air waves As I glide and soar high & high Above the world In a sweel parallel universe (10th July 2021) Paghunda Zahid

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Date: 9/23/2022 2:56:00 AM
Hi Paghunda: Your imagination can take you anywhere. My friend told me about a book that explores this subject “A Darker Shade of Magic.” by VE Schwab.
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Date: 11/18/2021 11:25:00 AM
Mountains above clouds..' maybe gas clouds Or meteor blankets.? I suppose there can be Many cloud types, I don't believe any being can Open any separate reality, apart from God.' I Put this from experience of myself and others Who I believe to be true witnesses of such Events.' Enjoyed your words and thoughts Pagunda..'
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Date: 11/4/2021 7:14:00 AM
I enjoyed this enchanting write ..
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Date: 7/25/2021 8:37:00 AM
Dearest Paghunda, you vivid, vibrant and profound pen spills with a potent magical potion that brings me to the essence of your impassioned poetic realm centered "in the unlimited multiverses". I rise and fall on the heartbeat and breath of your striking and thought-provoking imagery. Spectacular musings, my wonderful friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/29/2021 11:51:00 AM
Thank you for the kind comment Susan.. It is a delight to read your comments.. Cheers
Date: 7/17/2021 7:19:00 PM
A world in which to escape to in times of trouble and conflict. Love your journey here, Paghunda.
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Date: 8/29/2021 12:56:00 PM
Thanks Harry
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Date: 8/29/2021 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Harry
Date: 7/13/2021 7:00:00 AM
I sometimes wonder if we have a glimpse of the parallel world when we look in a mirror. I enjoyed reading your contemplations. Well done.
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Date: 7/13/2021 10:38:00 AM
What if these mirrors are actually portals to the other worlds!!
Date: 7/12/2021 1:58:00 PM
oh I think about this too. I think it is actually possible. Love this. A fave.
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Date: 7/13/2021 10:38:00 AM
So nice of you Andrea
Date: 7/12/2021 10:06:00 AM
Also one of my favourite areas of writing and reading as well.Beautiful imagination,creation and imagery as well.keep it up
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Date: 7/12/2021 10:49:00 AM
Thanks Aamir
Date: 7/10/2021 8:37:00 PM
Ah, this is wonderful poetry, Paghunda. I really enjoy your speculative musing. Such things I have not thought of for decades. Thanks for the reawakening! A FAVE for me! :) gw
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Date: 7/11/2021 2:26:00 PM
Aww I am glad that it triggered your imaginations... Thank you!
Date: 7/10/2021 12:14:00 PM
Your sweet parallel universe - make me think, what if the other opens a portal and enters my world, would we know who is who? Wonderful poetry, love your imagination! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. P.S. My Planet of Venus poem has as yet not been marked, the Sponsor has not marked the contest thus far.
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Date: 7/10/2021 1:38:00 PM
Thanks Jenn... Well they say the difference can be as small as a difference of a mole or as large as a difference of gender... So can't say anything if we will know who is who or not.. Lol
Date: 7/10/2021 3:37:00 AM
The concept you project in this creative poem gives me food for thought, Paghunda! For sure it sets my imagination in motion, wondering about "ifs". Maybe one day more things will be revealed to us.... Best regards // paul
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/10/2021 1:36:00 PM
Yes, indeed... Thank you
Date: 7/9/2021 9:01:00 PM
The idea of parallel universes is a fascinating idea to me. Your poem is intriguing and excellently written.
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Date: 7/10/2021 1:36:00 PM
Thanks Evelyn
Date: 7/9/2021 8:30:00 PM
The parallel universe, indeed, is a beautiful concept. Wonderfully done.
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Date: 7/10/2021 1:36:00 PM
Yupp
Date: 7/9/2021 1:49:00 PM
Hi Paghunda, Unique concept for a poem! Wouldn't it be so interesting if we did have counterparts in different universes and we could meet them? Supposedly, we all have someone who is physically identical to us in this world. - Take care and stay safe in all that you do, Gail
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Date: 7/10/2021 1:37:00 PM
Yeah, it is such an interesting concept

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