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In a Meadow

In the meadow the two would meet Quietly, quickly and oh, so discreet Her scent would overpower him with uncontrollable lust The sight of him,his strength, his overpowering musk Briefly these two a moment they'd share Out of sight from the world so no one could stare He would gently rub his body up to hers And willingly,she'd give herself a total immerse Staring into each other's eyes filled with desire The lust between the both of them never seemed to tire Sweet lovers glistening under the summers heat Both were spent from passions of these lovers so sweet He would rise and turn from her leaving her alone Shortly after him, she would slowly roam Until another day when these two lovers would meet This black stallion and fair young mare, a foal soon to greet

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Date: 4/22/2013 6:06:00 PM
High marks for the surprise ending. SuZ
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Date: 4/20/2013 11:15:00 PM
hahaha, a horse tale!!! what a great twist!!!
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Date: 4/17/2013 5:03:00 PM
A love poem for horses. I didn't see it till the end. Well done, great flow and rhyme. Thanks for your kind words about my poem, O'er The Battlements I Do Roam. Thanks, Terry.
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Date: 4/16/2013 6:50:00 PM
Yes, very nicely written, Jen. And raunchy. - Red
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Date: 4/16/2013 3:35:00 PM
Ah a horse lover, fine animals best when running free. Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2013 1:51:00 PM
For the contest? Its great, Jennifer...a little mysterious too
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Date: 4/16/2013 2:10:00 PM
Yes, I wanted to spice it up a bit. I usually don't write this sensual,but when talking about horses, I can. Thought I'd try my hand at it. I knew where I was going just had to try and get there.
Date: 4/16/2013 9:12:00 AM
Very descriptive and a pleasure to read.
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Date: 4/16/2013 8:57:00 AM
Massive intensity here! Embrace the simple pleasures. Nice work!
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