In a Meadow

In the meadow the two would meet
Quietly, quickly and oh, so discreet
Her scent would overpower him with uncontrollable lust
The sight of him,his strength, his overpowering musk
Briefly these two a moment they'd share
Out of sight from the world so no one could stare
He would gently rub his body up to hers
And willingly,she'd give herself a total immerse
Staring into each other's eyes filled with desire
The lust between the both of them never seemed to tire
Sweet lovers glistening under the summers heat
Both were spent from passions of these lovers so sweet
He would rise and turn from her leaving her alone
Shortly after him, she would slowly roam
Until another day when these two lovers would meet
This black stallion and fair young mare, a foal soon to greet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Delaney Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 6:06 PM
High marks for the surprise ending. SuZ
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 11:15 PM
hahaha, a horse tale!!! what a great twist!!!
Burns Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 5:03 PM
A love poem for horses. I didn't see it till the end. Well done, great flow and rhyme. Thanks for your kind words about my poem, O'er The Battlements I Do Roam. Thanks, Terry.
Omara Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 6:50 PM
Yes, very nicely written, Jen. And raunchy. - Red
Guzzi Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 3:35 PM
Ah a horse lover, fine animals best when running free. Light & Love
Hunter Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 1:51 PM
For the contest? Its great, Jennifer...a little mysterious too
Sister Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 2:10 PM
Yes, I wanted to spice it up a bit. I usually don't write this sensual,but when talking about horses, I can. Thought I'd try my hand at it. I knew where I was going just had to try and get there.
Pettit Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 9:12 AM
Very descriptive and a pleasure to read.
Tacito Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 8:57 AM
Massive intensity here! Embrace the simple pleasures. Nice work!
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