In a Hurry

I gripped the handle as I handled the grip And tripped on a book as I booked the trip.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/28/2012 2:26:00 PM

Wow....so creative and unique Joyce. So happy to see this entry in the winner's circle. Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2012 7:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in David's "Chiasmus" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2012 8:33:00 PM

This was so cute, Joyce. Big congrats to you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/27/2012 4:16:00 PM

congrats Joyce on an awesome win for amazing words so wise .. way to go my friend..luv..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/8/2012 6:54:00 AM

Thanks for the amusementy this morning Joyce.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/8/2012 6:00:00 AM

Joyce, your chiasmus is clever! If for the contest, I know you'll do well. Have a wonderful day on the west coast. I guess it's about 5 am on your side of the country. You're an early bird! Blessings, Rhonda

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 3/8/2012 6:02:00 AM

Nevermind...I see you posted this last night. Although you still might be an early bird. Maybe reading this now! Have a great day...blessings, Rhonda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2012 1:30:00 AM

Love it Joyce ! - oxox Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2012 11:00:00 PM

ps ENjoyed your remark to my real food song. I actually ate that way in my youth. My appetite is insatiable.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2012 10:59:00 PM

hahaha. I sure hope I can be as clever as you and come up with some of these!!!