In a Hotel Room

Their meetings were always clandestine
Often in the same hotel room
and on the same day and time
where by lustful desires  they were consumed
and by the smell of cheap perfume
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ryerson Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 2:06 PM
The second and third lines really threw me, leaving much to ponder and digest...Great job, Joseph - Tim
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 8:38 AM
this poem makes it sound tawdry, as it should be. Good one, Joseph.
Horsman Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 4:28 AM
well this leaves the imagination reeling Joseph,, excellent poem, just love this...
May Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 6:19 AM
thank you so Harry....that was my intent...glad it came across....
Roberts Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 11:06 PM
Great write Joseph.....Seren
May Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 6:18 AM
thank you Seren
A   Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 8:51 PM
Hello Joseph, awee... cheap perfume... a good entry.. good luck in the contest...LINDA
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February 8, 2013 at 6:17 AM
thank you PD....
Gorelick Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 8:17 PM
why cheap perfume? Id save up for the best! lol. Loved it. BG
May Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 6:14 AM
lol.....Maybe white diamonds?...thank you Barbara
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