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IN A GILDED INSTANT
The monarch’s wings opened as a picture book, fluttering by. It glided, uncertain but undeterred, through a gentle haze of gold and shadow, the garden’s hush punctuated by the faint murmur of leaves. Sunlight filtered in rare skeins, dappling the monarch’s patterned wings as it hovered, hesitated, and then pressed onward—a flicker stitched between petal and air. The world, for one gilded instant, seemed spun from elegant silk.
Painted in oranges, kissed with black lace, the monarch glides through the air and pirouettes in a ballet of grace. Oh, to witness her beauty, a fleeting affair a living poem, a jeweled muse~ a moment suspended in delicate air.
(Poem written for USPS Stamp Poetry Contest, Robert James Liguori, sponsor)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/15/2025 6:37:00 PM
She is definitely one of the most beautiful butterflies around, love your essence and your poetic story !
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/16/2025 5:15:00 PM
thank you, Rose, for stopping by and for your kind comments. Appreciate you, hugs
Date: 7/15/2025 6:15:00 PM
A lovely choice for the contest, Sara. This should do well. A poet friend down the hall, Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/16/2025 5:14:00 PM
awww, thank you Bill down the hall hugs,
Date: 7/15/2025 5:51:00 PM
It is fun to see what stamps people picked!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/16/2025 5:14:00 PM
I agree...interesting
Date: 7/15/2025 4:08:00 PM
This is very beautiful, Sara! I have missed you here! <3
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/16/2025 5:14:00 PM
awww, thank you, Paige. I appreciate your kind words. I've missed being here and am grateful to be back. enjoy your evening, Sasra

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