In a Darkened Attic Room

In A Darkened Attic Room

In attic room, one window tightly shut,
Dwells broken heart hidden from future pain.
Bare as a savage brute's dark, empty hut-
Condemned to no hope, no future, no gain.

Where rests such perilous fear darkness reigns;-
Shattered dreams give rise to dark illusions.
Hope rejected brings its most wicked stains,
Evil held, births its blackest conclusions.

Grown in decay until nothing remains,
Yet sad hope is better than none at all.
True love waits the bliss it always contains,
Treasures gifted, one only has to call.

If one ray of love's light but filters in
Love brings life and its promises again.

Robert J. Lindley, 1-30-2016
Sonnet

Syllables Per Line:	
10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 0 10 10
Total # Syllables:140
Total # Words: 103
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Robert, thank you for the winning write.... skat
Kimathi Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 8:21 AM
Congrats Robert, for your placement with this picturesque piece!! ;-)
Roberts Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 7:10 PM
beautiful sonnet, many congrats on the win Robert
Lindley Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 5:29 PM
THANKS MY FRIENDS... Very trying times for my family. I saw the contest and immediately thought of that poem.. Very happy FOR THAT PIECE to have placed.....
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 4:56 PM
It's so good to see you here today and on the winners list with your sonnet, Robert. I hope you are having a good day, and I congratulate you for a job well done.
Callus Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:25 PM
This is beautiful Robert, but so very sad...dream shattering! Luckily not all hope is lost...as long as that flickers not all is lost! #7 Regards, my friend. // paul
Schneiter Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 4:17 PM
I love the validity of the message: just a single ray of light can kindle hope. Your poem radiates truth, Robert, and is rendered in lovely poetic form. Thank you for sharing it.
George   Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 5:48 PM
Dear, Robert. This is such a heart wrenching sonnet packed with intense visuals. I can see it all so clearly and sense the ambience found only in an attic. I especially like your brilliant ending. This one goes to my FAV's. Magnificent writing my friend!
Vaso Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 12:12 AM
Robert this is just a fine piece of beautiful poetry!
Lane Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 2:29 PM
The promise of love always gives the light of hope. As dark and sad as this one is, Robert, it's as finely crafted as ever.
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