In a Blink of An Eye-Collaboration With Charmaine Chircop

Sitting on the window sill with the wind in my hair I gaze up into the stars, pondering the great unknown. Thinking back of that night, when I heard your first cry tears of joy filled my heart as we carried you home. Nervous and excited, a mother I had just become, you were my angel, my being, my son. You were all that I dreamt of, from my lungs, pure breath. In the cradle I rocked you, before going to bed. With gurgles and babbles you have filled up our lives. With first footsteps, first mouthfuls, with sweet little rhymes With first schooldays, first friendships, first free little moves, Like doing your homework, and tying your own shoes We followed your shadow from a distance not far, giving you your wings, yet knowing where you are The time has passed by, in a blink of an eye, Soon you'll be leaving, making this mother cry.
Co-written by Charmaine Chircop & Tim Smith October 18, 2014
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Roper Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Tim, You and Charmaine a wonderful write in this collaborative piece. I sure can relate to every word... Hugs Eve. ~`*
Mcdaid Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 5:42 AM
this touched my heart very deeply beautifully penned you both
Chircop Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 5:56 PM
Hel lo liam,tnls so much
Smith Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 11:29 PM
Thanks liam from both of us...cheers
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 7:00 PM
Hey, tim, I know Charma's baby is a girl, so do you have a baby boy that you were thinking of when you did this poem with Charma? This is sweet as can be. Charma must be heaven to work with!
Chircop Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Hi. Sweet andrea..Thankyou..big hug
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 7:04 PM
I have two boys and one is going off to college soon and eventually off on his own..So the inspiration came from there...Charma was great to write with...hugs Tim
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October 19, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Dear Tim and Charma, What joy little ones bring to parents' lives! You do have to let them spread their wings or they will rebel, yet you are still there to catch them if they fall. Such a wonderful description of loving parents. Love, Carolyn
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 7:07 PM
Thank you Carolyn..I so do know but I've noticed him growing up so much more this past year...hugs from both of us
Nance Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 9:00 AM
Great collab, you can't tell who wrote what! a beautiful merge of two beautiful souls!
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:32 AM
Thanks Cas.....I loved your tribute to breast cancer awareness at your blog page casarah.altervista.org
Chircop Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 9:39 AM
You are a doll,tnks
Yvonne Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 7:13 AM
Two of my favorite people writing an emotional poem that draws at the heart strings, what could be better than that.
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:33 AM
Thank you Maurice..I'm sure you know how this feels with your two daughters.
Chircop Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 9:41 AM
You are one of my favourite poets too :.),you must know that,tnks so much
Manassian Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 6:21 AM
Wow...the two of you just took this theme and danced with it. Beautiful.
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:35 AM
Thanks sweetie...hugs Tim
Chircop Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 9:43 AM
Hi sweet sis...Thanks
Lamoureux Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 6:19 AM
To see our children head out into the world is a great priveledge an yet it is accompanied with a certain sadness. You both have captured the experience of parenthood with a sincere elegance.
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:38 AM
Thanks Richard...My oldest has got one foot out the door.
Chircop Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Tnks my good friend : )
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 2:55 AM
Absolutely stunning - can can relate to every word my friends - this line is simple perfection We followed your shadow from a distance not far, giving you your wings, yet knowing where you are - into 7 and faves - a fantastic collaboration!!!!! Hugs to you both:-) Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Thanks Jan...hugs Tim xxx
Chircop Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 9:51 AM
aaeawaw. thanks sweet Jan..yay
A. Sharma Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 2:15 AM
So sweet n emotive Tim n Charmaine! Wonderful work done u both great poets!
Chircop Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 9:53 AM
Yes Tim is great and so are you : )tmks
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 8:42 AM
Thank you Upma from the two of us...hugs
Chircop Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 12:03 AM
Hi dear Tim..Thankyou for being a great friend.It was pure fun,and Im favouring your lines..Awesome you : )
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 8:40 AM
Thanks Charma it was my pleasure to write this with you and especially a subject so near and dear to my heart.....hugs Tim
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October 18, 2014 at 11:03 PM
There are such tender and heartfelt words written in every line of this poem. Tim, this is a beautiful collaboration from you and Charmaine. Really well done to you both!.... Thank you for your nice comments on my poem. I tried replying to them, but it's not working for some reason. I'm sorry about that!
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:34 AM
Thank you Kelly my good friend...hugs Tim
Chircop Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 12:10 AM
Thankyou kelly : )
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 10:40 PM
Very nice collaboration from both of you Tim! :) Xxxx D
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Thanks Dorian...hugs Tim
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October 19, 2014 at 12:11 AM
Thankyou Dorian
Roper Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 10:19 PM
This is such a nice write of the love a parent for their child :) eve
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Thank you Eve....hugs Tim
Chircop Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 12:12 AM
Thankyou Eve :.)
Roberts Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 9:51 PM
Tim and Charmaine, this is a lovely collab. truly loved reading it, well done to you both.....Seren
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Thank you Seren....hugs
Chircop Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 12:13 AM
Thankyou sweet Serena : )
Bateman Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 9:33 PM
Tim, You and Charmaine did a wonderful job with this piece in your collaborative effort. Very Well-Done!! The free verse poem flows very well and is a beautiful, very straight-forward read, and a "7" from me. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:43 AM
Thank you my good friend...cheers Tim
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October 19, 2014 at 12:15 AM
Thanks so so much: )
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