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In Virgin Arms

IN VIRGIN ARMS Like first love, snow is always new, unstirred, Always innocent, always pure. Silent now the melodies of the bird, No echo rings through the boughs demure. Branches make it clear in black and white Snow wants to retain its secrecy withal A private place - none to intrude, to invite To disrupt our love, release the thrall Draped in soft thick blanket, each latticed arm, Each limb and finger, completely dressed In a gown of purity, light cover to charm, Takes my love, gives me rapture, is twice blessed. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Entered in John Freeman's Contest - Pictures of winter

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Date: 12/6/2011 12:54:00 PM
Love these lines, "Like first love, snow is always new, unstirred, Always innocent, always pure." Like beholding a virgin, free of all contamination of men's mistakes, Sid. Thanks for sharing your gem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/6/2011 8:53:00 AM
I love the analogy of comparing snow to love. Beautiful lines my friend. Congratulations
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Date: 12/6/2011 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2011 5:25:00 AM
Wow....what a nice spin on a fresh snow...congrats on this awesome entry...lines flow with descriptive beauty! Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 12/6/2011 1:25:00 AM
Congrats on your win this is lovely x
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Date: 12/25/2010 3:30:00 AM
Nice expressions on the first snow which is twice blessed, Sydney
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Date: 12/25/2010 12:39:00 AM
It's a beauty .Wonderful images of first love comparing it with ever white pure snow you have drawn.Enjoyed-kashinath
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