In Virgin Arms

IN   VIRGIN  ARMS    

Like first love, snow is always new, unstirred,
Always  innocent, always pure.
Silent  now  the  melodies of the bird, 
No echo rings through the boughs demure.

Branches make it clear in black and white
Snow wants to retain its secrecy withal 
A private place  -  none to intrude,  to invite
To disrupt our love, release the thrall

Draped in soft thick  blanket, each latticed arm,
Each limb and finger, completely dressed
In a gown of purity, light cover to charm,
Takes my love, gives me rapture,  is twice blessed.

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Entered in John Freeman's Contest   -  Pictures of winter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/6/2011 12:54:00 PM
Love these lines, "Like first love, snow is always new, unstirred, Always innocent, always pure." Like beholding a virgin, free of all contamination of men's mistakes, Sid. Thanks for sharing your gem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/6/2011 8:53:00 AM
I love the analogy of comparing snow to love. Beautiful lines my friend. Congratulations
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Date: 12/6/2011 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2011 5:25:00 AM
Wow....what a nice spin on a fresh snow...congrats on this awesome entry...lines flow with descriptive beauty! Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 12/6/2011 1:25:00 AM
Congrats on your win this is lovely x
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Date: 12/25/2010 3:30:00 AM
Nice expressions on the first snow which is twice blessed, Sydney
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Date: 12/25/2010 12:39:00 AM
It's a beauty .Wonderful images of first love comparing it with ever white pure snow you have drawn.Enjoyed-kashinath
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