Impulses

Spur of the moment
     
decisions...
           
lifetime of regrets


August 14, 2018



MagiCicada 13 
The Heart Of The Matter Contest
By Maureen McGreavy
Second Place

changedesirefatelifeselffree verse

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Reason A. Poteet

August 20, 2018 at 8:02 AM

So true, salutations on your placement for this well worked brevity.

Susan Gentry

August 20, 2018 at 7:34 PM

Thank you.

Francesca Pappadogiannis

August 19, 2018 at 12:22 PM

Congratulations Susan... brilliant wording! :)x

Susan Gentry

August 20, 2018 at 7:34 PM

Thanks.

Roy Pett

August 19, 2018 at 5:22 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Susan, excellent verse with so much truth, well written my friend. :))

Susan Gentry

August 20, 2018 at 7:33 PM

Thank you!

Virginia Waters

August 19, 2018 at 2:20 AM

wow - strong image and statement - great winner

Susan Gentry

August 19, 2018 at 5:13 AM

Thank you.

Janis Medders Tobechi

August 18, 2018 at 5:40 PM

I think my parents made one of them. Back with congratulations Susan. Blessings, Sian.

Susan Gentry

August 19, 2018 at 5:11 AM

Oh my. I get the spur of the moment but not the lifetime regret... Blessings to you too. Thank you. You are so kind!

Kim Rodrigues

August 18, 2018 at 5:34 PM

The power of choices!

Susan Gentry

August 19, 2018 at 5:06 AM

Yes, that they are.

Line Gauthier

August 18, 2018 at 5:26 PM

Wow - heavy message. Congrats on your well deserved win, Susan.

Susan Gentry

August 19, 2018 at 5:05 AM

Thank you, Line.

Augustus Black

August 16, 2018 at 6:37 AM

Huge story is coming forth from this short art. People do take such uncanny actions. Best of luck for your life Susan. Love this...

Susan Gentry

August 16, 2018 at 9:59 AM

Thank you! I appreciate you reading and commenting.

Mystic Rose Rose

August 15, 2018 at 5:32 AM

some people are prone to acting impulsively all to often, They are the ones that have the most regrets, Its nice to own a balance. I loved your poem Susan, have a great day, Hugs

Susan Gentry

August 15, 2018 at 9:00 PM

Yes, balance is what it is all about. Thanks for reading and commenting.