Impression

The crested waves were like frills, rolling toward me I want to be that light, carefree, worry free Led by the tides that pull me Floating effortlessly to the shore Where you are waiting for me Where I know, everything will be ok, when I am there I dream of a secluded island with white sand Where there is nothing but love and peace Such thoughts are needed in this world... That has become so hectic, so full of concerns Clouded by difficulties, weighed upon by challenges Oh, let me be the crested wave Letting go of all my troubles before I land... So the impression that I leave, Is newly, fresh, upon the sand Heidi Sands 11/13/22

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/18/2022 7:18:00 AM

Beautifully written... These are words to live by... Keep up the excellent writing, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/18/2022 7:33:00 AM

Thank you very much Kelly. I appreciate your comment on this :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/18/2022 5:54:00 AM

Heidi, this is such a beautiful metaphor! The peace and serenity conveyed by your beautiful words are a wonderfully meditative read this morning! Happy Friday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/18/2022 6:20:00 AM

It is nice to see your kind comment today Mike. I am happy to hear that. Happy Friday! xxoo :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/14/2022 8:42:00 PM

Oh, this is so lovely, Heidi. Love it...Harry

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/15/2022 4:47:00 AM

I am happy that you love it Harry. Thank you very much :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/14/2022 5:39:00 PM

A beauty of a poem! Carefree…worry free…

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/15/2022 4:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim. I hope you have a great day :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/14/2022 6:29:00 AM

Heidi, you have written a piece that is quite moving and conveys a wish for love and serenity. I really enjoyed the vibes all the way through.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/14/2022 7:42:00 AM

Thank you very much Sotto. I appreciate your kind input and I am happy to hear you enjoyed it. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/14/2022 5:41:00 AM

Wonderfully emotive write, Heidi--longing for love and peace. Enjoyed the vibes throughout and the ending stanza is very special. A FAVE from me.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/14/2022 7:40:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay. I am happy you enjoyed this and appreciate the feedback and the Fave ! I hope you have a great day :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/14/2022 1:09:00 AM

Love the imagery and use of metaphors Heidi. We all want to be that crested wave shaking off our worries. Have a great week ahead. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/14/2022 7:40:00 AM

Thank you very much Tom I hope you have a nice day :)