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Impression

The crested waves were like frills, rolling toward me
I want to be that light, carefree, worry free
Led by the tides that pull me
Floating effortlessly to the shore
Where you are waiting for me
Where I know, everything will be ok, when I am there

I dream of a secluded island with white sand
Where there is nothing but love and peace
Such thoughts are needed in this world...
That has become so hectic, so full of concerns
Clouded by difficulties, weighed upon by challenges

Oh, let me be the crested wave
Letting go of all my troubles before I land...
So the impression that I leave,
Is newly, fresh, upon the sand

Heidi Sands

11/13/22

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Kelly Deschler Date: 11/18/2022 7:18:00 AM Beautifully written... These are words to live by... Keep up the excellent writing, Heidi! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/18/2022 7:33:00 AM Thank you very much Kelly. I appreciate your comment on this :)

Mike Gentile Date: 11/18/2022 5:54:00 AM Heidi, this is such a beautiful metaphor! The peace and serenity conveyed by your beautiful words are a wonderfully meditative read this morning! Happy Friday xxoo Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/18/2022 6:20:00 AM It is nice to see your kind comment today Mike. I am happy to hear that. Happy Friday! xxoo :)

Harry Horsman Date: 11/14/2022 8:42:00 PM Oh, this is so lovely, Heidi. Love it...Harry Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/15/2022 4:47:00 AM I am happy that you love it Harry. Thank you very much :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/14/2022 5:39:00 PM A beauty of a poem! Carefree…worry free… Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/15/2022 4:47:00 AM Thank you so much Kim. I hope you have a great day :)

Sotto Poet Date: 11/14/2022 6:29:00 AM Heidi, you have written a piece that is quite moving and conveys a wish for love and serenity. I really enjoyed the vibes all the way through. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/14/2022 7:42:00 AM Thank you very much Sotto. I appreciate your kind input and I am happy to hear you enjoyed it. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/14/2022 5:41:00 AM Wonderfully emotive write, Heidi--longing for love and peace. Enjoyed the vibes throughout and the ending stanza is very special. A FAVE from me. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/14/2022 7:40:00 AM Thank you very much Vijay. I am happy you enjoyed this and appreciate the feedback and the Fave ! I hope you have a great day :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/14/2022 1:09:00 AM Love the imagery and use of metaphors Heidi. We all want to be that crested wave shaking off our worries. Have a great week ahead. Tom Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/14/2022 7:40:00 AM Thank you very much Tom I hope you have a nice day :)