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Imperfections

Sparks are living in you and they set off within imperfections of two faceted stones, that won‘t fit with one another. Sometimes I still don't see... How it works, this attraction: it declines, and again it recovers. In me linden has bloomed, there was many spring rain, filling puddles again with new hopes. While the soft ground was trying to make a captured spark sprout, even the whistling got lost in the tree tops. Well, along all your words are inaudible. How it mimics the melody, mimics the bird- it attempts to repeat, to invite the light in. Fish emerge from the depth of the puddles gasping words, but a sound resides in the lungs. We're so random. So, my dear, how it works, are we even a match? Will it live with my shyness, will it breath in all thoughts. I own beings of shadows with no shape by themselves, overflowing serenity in dark ravine, without struggles of light they won’t dance, they won’t melt. I still blow you a petal to catch.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/26/2016 11:46:00 AM
Emilija, if in the future you decided to post a poem, would you be kind and invite me to read your poem. Thank you for the nice reply. LINDA
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Date: 2/27/2016 2:14:00 AM
Thank you
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Date: 2/27/2016 2:03:00 AM
Of course I will let you know if I post anything??
Date: 2/25/2016 11:19:00 PM
Nice to read this one again, Emilija... when will you post a new poem... LINDA
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Date: 2/26/2016 3:39:00 AM
Thank you for visiting again. It is very sweet of you. I am not thinking of posting anything any time soon. Just too busy. But thank you for remembering??
Date: 1/4/2016 3:07:00 PM
I'm also so glad you stopped by to thank me this year. I know your poems are from 2014. Have happy 2016
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Date: 1/4/2016 12:57:00 PM
enjoyed reading
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Date: 7/27/2014 6:04:00 PM
Hi Emilija, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 7/26/2014 4:07:00 PM
Beautiful, inspirational write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.
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E. Ray
Date: 7/28/2014 7:16:00 AM
thank you;}
Date: 7/26/2014 3:16:00 PM
Hi Emilija, I was hoping to see a new poem from you today. Please stop by my and tap me on the shoulder when you post a new poem...Linda
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Date: 7/26/2014 8:57:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Emilja. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/25/2014 4:37:00 PM
Emilija,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/25/2014 10:05:00 AM
A very warm welcome Emilija! Keep going and keep doing the great work like this one..Appreciate the poems written by other poets and they'll appreciate your's :) You're welcome to vist my page anytime :) Good Luck and Have a nice day! :)"
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