Imperfections

Sparks are living in
you
and they set off
within imperfections
of two faceted
stones, that won‘t
fit with one
another.
Sometimes I still
don't see...
How it works, this
attraction:
it declines, and
again it recovers.

In me linden has
bloomed, there was
many spring rain,
filling puddles
again with new
hopes.
While the soft
ground was trying to
make 
a captured spark
sprout,
even the whistling
got lost in the tree
tops.
Well, along all your
words are inaudible.
How it mimics the
melody, mimics the
bird-
it attempts to
repeat, to invite
the light in.

Fish emerge from the
depth of the puddles
gasping words, but a
sound resides in the
lungs.
We're so random. So,
my dear, how it
works, are we even a
match?
Will it live with my
shyness, will it
breath in
all thoughts. I own
beings of shadows
with no shape by
themselves,
overflowing serenity
in dark ravine,
without struggles of
light they won’t
dance, they won’t
melt.
I still blow you a
petal to catch.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/26/2016 11:46:00 AM
Emilija, if in the future you decided to post a poem, would you be kind and invite me to read your poem. Thank you for the nice reply. LINDA
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Date: 2/27/2016 2:14:00 AM
Thank you
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Date: 2/27/2016 2:03:00 AM
Of course I will let you know if I post anything??
Date: 2/25/2016 11:19:00 PM
Nice to read this one again, Emilija... when will you post a new poem... LINDA
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Date: 2/26/2016 3:39:00 AM
Thank you for visiting again. It is very sweet of you. I am not thinking of posting anything any time soon. Just too busy. But thank you for remembering??
Date: 1/4/2016 3:07:00 PM
I'm also so glad you stopped by to thank me this year. I know your poems are from 2014. Have happy 2016
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Date: 1/4/2016 12:57:00 PM
enjoyed reading
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Date: 7/27/2014 6:04:00 PM
Hi Emilija, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 7/26/2014 4:07:00 PM
Beautiful, inspirational write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:16:00 AM
thank you;}
Date: 7/26/2014 3:16:00 PM
Hi Emilija, I was hoping to see a new poem from you today. Please stop by my and tap me on the shoulder when you post a new poem...Linda
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Date: 7/26/2014 8:57:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Emilja. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/25/2014 4:37:00 PM
Emilija,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/25/2014 10:05:00 AM
A very warm welcome Emilija! Keep going and keep doing the great work like this one..Appreciate the poems written by other poets and they'll appreciate your's :) You're welcome to vist my page anytime :) Good Luck and Have a nice day! :)"
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